Poetic Limbo

When I think of love
  Its always her
About how it felt, and when it occurred.
   Amore is now my poetic limbo
With booming drums then crashing cymbals.
       An orchestration
    Of rhythm and rhymes
Which has no bridge during frustrating times.

This continuous movement weakens my knees
And forever conducts each yearning need.
         
           Truly a soul
       Can't help but rock
   When his mind's just a beacon
         For lusty thoughts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Wilmot Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Lusty thoughts are cool, its acting out is what one must be careful with. Thanks for stopping by.. Carlus
Gorelick Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:58 PM
Those lusty thoughts can be a big problem. smile.. I enjoyed your poem. BG
A  Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 6:05 PM
INTERESTING, MIND PROVOKING ,ENJOYED ,,IRMA
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