Poetic Justice

A pickpocket named Dodger
lived to become an old codger,
alas a walking stick and heaps of pain
his getaway speed sadly on the wane.

© Harry J Horsman  2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/20/2018 5:53:00 PM
Cute one, Harry. Imagine an old codger like that still trying to 'raise cane.' Congrats on your win in the contest, and Season's best! ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/20/2018 5:13:00 PM
How funny this is, Harry! You brought the old codger to life in your witty poem. Congratulations on your third-place win in a contest with very strong competition! Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn
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Date: 9/8/2010 3:07:00 AM
haha-- good one Harry and I see this won too-- congrats for this funny write :) nikko :)
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Date: 8/25/2010 1:38:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 8/22/2010 11:32:00 PM
Very cool and true to the title! Congrats on your win. Caroline.
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Date: 8/19/2010 10:39:00 PM
Loved this one! congrats.
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Date: 8/18/2010 11:40:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 8/18/2010 8:42:00 AM
Nice one, Harry. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 8:39:00 PM
Hey Harry congratulations on your win with this awesome entry in John's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 8/17/2010 7:24:00 PM
looks like I see you had a victory with this cute little clerihew! congrats. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:55:00 PM
LOL, Harry! you did hand out some giggles and smiles here. Enjoyed the whole poetic justice in your poem. Good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 8/17/2010 5:44:00 PM
Congrats harry on your super win in the Giggles Poetry contest with this awesome write.. enjoy another special victory tonight.. with luv.. caio..
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Date: 8/17/2010 5:32:00 PM
Two bad he didn't have a second profession to fall back on. Congratulations. Harry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/17/2010 5:10:00 PM
Big congratulations, Harry!!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:56:00 PM
Congrats on the well deserved win, harry
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:49:00 PM
Very witty and humorous there Harry. Congratulations on your number two prize winner. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/17/2010 12:44:00 PM
I loved this one Harry. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:39:00 AM
Very funny, Harry! What a nice write! Wish you best of luck for John's contest with this Clerihew! All the best!...Gert
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Date: 8/17/2010 2:08:00 AM
I love your entry for John's contest Harry, so funny ;) thanks for the smiles this morning.. Hope you'll have a great Tuesday ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/16/2010 11:37:00 AM
Laughing..oh brother..I guess crooks get old too. Good one my friend. BG
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Date: 8/16/2010 10:00:00 AM
I am gggley...enjoyed reading!
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:38:00 AM
SUPER!! I think John will get a great laugh from this old man's loss of "getaway speed," Harry. Don't think you even need luck to win this contest. Sometimes, talent stands out on its own! Love, Carolyn
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