Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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25.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Poetic Inhalation Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Di11y Da11y 

6nd place in the contest

- Poetic Inhalation -

     Between anemones
     where the soil smells damp
     Lungs are filled with poetry
     Destiny, the exact moment
     Breathing, embroidered cosmos rhythm
     Synonym, a balance setting
     Metaphors sticks to the palate
                         - sweet chewing gum
     which grows and grows
                          ... must spit it out

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Paula Goldsmith February 12, 2024 at 7:01 AM Back with Congratulations on your "Poetic Inhalation" write. I enjoyed reading your creative write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Christuraj Alex February 9, 2024 at 7:31 PM "Breathing, embroidered cosmos rhythm" - As usual very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Duke Beaufort February 6, 2024 at 12:05 PM It's pretty much the way it happens. Often it's just an observation that inspires us to be creative. It is a lot of fun really and you look at it in a most interesting and direct way.

Linda Alice Fowler January 31, 2024 at 7:13 AM What imagination Anne-Lise. Delightful! :)

Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2024 at 11:31 AM Very nice!

Hilda Greenhough January 26, 2024 at 8:43 PM An entertaining poem of poems being created. It astounded me with the brutal honesty. Very good poem.

Brian Sambourne January 26, 2024 at 8:10 PM What a terrific analogy between expanding chewing gum and plump metaphors to spit out. Truly top notch creative writing! Inhalation + exhalation on a poet's page. Best wishes, Brian

Paula Goldsmith January 26, 2024 at 10:43 AM I enjoyed reading your creative write/picture. Looks like we both did this one. "Good Luck" Hugs...  Have a blessed day writing away......................

Sotto Poet January 26, 2024 at 10:10 AM Your poem is a masterful reflection of the exquisite artistry of inhalation poetry, Anne-lise. I like its distinctiveness and the eloquent manner in which you have articulated your thoughts, particularly the concluding lines.

Jay Narain January 26, 2024 at 9:45 AM Creative poem. GL in contest.

Ink Empress January 26, 2024 at 7:55 AM Creative write really dear anne lise. I love how unique this is and the way youv phrased your thoughts especially the ending; i think D D will love this one, best wishes for the contest, pleasure always reading your work

Victor Buhagiar January 26, 2024 at 5:17 AM May your contest be a winner. Flowers bring out the best in us. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham January 26, 2024 at 12:56 AM You have to get them down on paper quickly or you might choke. Best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom

Silent One January 25, 2024 at 11:22 AM To released your poetic exhalation here... nicely done my friend..