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Poetic Heaven

In principles of love,
there is no perfection -
it is not your master, 
nor are you its slave.

In my poetic heaven,
muse needs no inspiration.

Cradled in my beloved's arms -
her embrace gentle and warm,
her petal like skin, tender and aromatic.
Her nature calms my childhood sorrows,
as all fears disappear.

This could be my final resting place.

Soothed by her angelic fingertips,
heavy head heals, resting softly, upon her chest,
listening to my name echo from her heart -
each beat creates a rhythm of romantic chants.

In the deepness of her eyes,
I can see the doorway to my soul.
Lyrics to a poem not heard before.
As our lips merge,
through the connection of breaths,
we create poetry without words.

There is an art to love, sadly not all are artists,
so seek the one who inspires your palette.

Simple Musing
Silent One
4 November 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Anvita Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 4:48 AM
This is beautifully penned!!
Bard Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Wow. This is beautiful!
One Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thank you..
Juman Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 3:50 PM
the man who knows analyzes what he reads better when he writes but boy are they too long for me to finish them one shot
One Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thank you..
Delaney Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Principles of love....so changing.... A lovely inspiring write. How blessed you are, Best, SuZ
One Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thank you..
Hopper Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 12:52 PM
So lovely! Heaven for sure
One Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thank you..
La France Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Silent, a beautiful poem of love, well done _Constance
One Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thank you..
Krutsinger Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:59 PM
She has such a gorgeous nature! She sounds heavenly.
One Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 6:08 AM
Thank you..
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 8:04 PM
This was so romantic like a fairy tale story. So tender and full of pure love. Anybody who has such a life partner will be surely blessed. First and last stanza very profound.
One Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Thank you..
Dutta Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Yes . There is an art to love and HARDLY an Artist comes up. Blessings always. Though you belong to my next Generation, yet I get inspiration from your poem and venture to continue in Poetry Soup with my limited vocabulary in English.
One Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:24 AM
You vocabulary is fine.. Thank you..
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 5:25 AM
The height of romance bidding an unutterable poem, one trembling in heaven’s ecstasy!
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:11 AM
Thank you Kim..
Jayasankar Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 12:20 AM
Your opening lines and closing lines just amazing!.. Just awesome Silent One. God bless.. ~ Ani :)
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:08 AM
Thank you..
Brul Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 9:46 PM
"There is an art to love, sadly not all are artists, so seek the one who inspires your palet" Another masterpiece!
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:08 AM
Thank you..
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:47 PM
very very beautiful, Silent One!
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:08 AM
Thank you..
Mcintosh Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Love this so.... I finally received the poetry book with your poems and LOVE them :) God bless you my friend :)
Dome Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 12:13 PM
Wow. a masterpiece of poetic art.A lesson in writing great poetry.Well done.
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Thank you Peter
Nicole Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 11:38 AM
"Not all are artists, so seek the one who inspires you" Sounds like someone has taken your breath away. :) Brandy
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Nope.... No one has ever taken my breath away... I'm sure she is out there though, somewhere... Thanks
Hamilton Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 10:24 AM
Another masterful write SO, drawing out the full spectrum of emotions, that's what love does, that's what this poem does!
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Thank you John..
Tor Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 9:04 AM
I love the descriptive words you use. This beautiful woman is just a pleasure to watch as this relaxing peaceful music plays, while her beauty is transformed on the canvass. You brought out emotions in me of a previous past. Everything combined is just wonderful my friend. Another favorite...
One Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 2:09 AM
If I ever find her, I will let you know.. I've not found someone like this in the physical form....
Nicole Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 4:09 PM
"through the connection of breaths, we create poetry without words" This poem is non fiction, but in your mind- this person exits. Simply breathtaking indeed.
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 11:49 AM
Brandy I meant the person in this poem doesn't exist, as it's non fiction... I never implied there isn't someone out there for everyone.. Although there are so many single people in this world.
Nicole Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 11:45 AM
He/She does exist. There is someone special out there for everyone. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Thanks Michael, but sadly, she does not exist.. If only...
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:05 AM
Enjoyed reading your romantic musings about your muse. Very expressive and descriptive work. Thanks for the visit to my page with encouraging words. Sara
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Thank you..
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Vividly descriptive and blissfully romantic, S.O. Janice
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thank you..
Singh Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 5:01 AM
..not your master nor are you its slave Excellent !
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thank you..
Buehler Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Well written and so lovely. Pure romance. :)
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:18 AM
Thank you..
Raza Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Beautiful Poem.
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Thank you..
Murray Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 6:04 PM
Beautifully written
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Thank you..
Crabtree Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 4:55 PM
I love the way you have connected poetry and love in this well written piece, Silent One. :)
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Thank you Angela..
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