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Saline solution, a mixture of water and salt, has various uses in medical and household settings. Medical Uses: Wound cleansing: It cleans wounds by removing debris and bacteria. ( isn't it ironic that tear as a noun and Verb are spelled the same but pronounced differently mean something else? ;))

Poetic Assault




A poem so moving, luring tears to fall, when our tears are formed in our hearts beating blood. With each beat those words repeat this dreaded call. Rip and tear scars of past pain causing a flood. Feelings long suppressed made brighter to recall, each stitch removed; prying petals from the bud. Yet there's healing power in water and salt! Tears cleanse, wounds mend, in this poetic assault.
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Date: 3/15/2025 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this one being on the winners' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/15/2025 12:18:00 PM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 3/13/2025 11:25:00 AM
A most eloquent essay of the physical and spiritual properties of a word.' And actions Of humanity pertaining to hurt and them care' I wish you well, if I may dare.? Almost pariah ( yet i met Jesus there') such a riposte..' For He is everywhere..)
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/14/2025 4:28:00 AM
Such lovely phrases... thank you for commenting Joe! Xo
Date: 3/13/2025 12:42:00 AM
powerful write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/14/2025 4:28:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 3/4/2025 5:56:00 AM
Dear Crystol, your words always carry such depth, and yes, evoking emotions buried yet never lost. Like a storm breaking open the sky, your poetry releases what the heart has long held captive. And in those tears, there is healing and proof that even pain can be transformed into something beautiful. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/4/2025 7:53:00 AM
I look forward to your comments for the depth and your interpretations of my work... you never disappoint! I'm so grateful you took time to do so today! Xoxo
Date: 3/3/2025 5:51:00 PM
Lovely done! An eloquent, intelligent, artful poem. xomo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/4/2025 7:51:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 3/3/2025 12:18:00 PM
What a creative/powerful write you have here. I really enjoyed reading it. "Good Luck" if for a contest... Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/3/2025 12:29:00 PM
Thanks! Xo
Date: 3/3/2025 12:09:00 PM
How interesting I read this today. Superb. Soupmail
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/3/2025 12:29:00 PM
God is good! Ty for reading! Xoxo
Date: 3/3/2025 12:00:00 PM
Wonderful piece. The power of Poetry. It has an element of the surreal. Enjoyed.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/3/2025 12:29:00 PM
Thank you! Xo
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