Poet Lurking

Oh deer how sad, its *****,
i betta change me undies,
hermaphrodites in hevvin here,
i'll be gone by monday:)

The poet lurks in thee, 
the searching one can look an see,
 let it out babe, let it come,
the words n ye are bloody one!

I kno the feel of the lonesome wheel,
when it only turns 4 you :)
seek and you will find fresher deals,
look till she comes, your heart it feels,
so bright n new.

never stop looking mate!


Jack Ross
surely know the feeling mate,
staggering, steady in me gait:)
your verse, immortality will bring,
long after death does surely sting,
keep writing the good ones mate!
Don 

sometimes the one appears,
but she is not for me,
i follow in her footsteps, 
but she's still running to be free,
oh dear hehe. :)

Don Johnson 17-july-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 5:16 AM
fascinating , don.. could i ask a favor?.. kindly comment on my latest poem called " chapter seven.".. i'm getting sytem errors for hours and would just want to know if there is a server problem here.. thanks loads!.. i can't reply to others as well:) huggs, nette
Ball Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 2:23 PM
This is relly cute. Love playing with words mysdelf. I like to watch the looks on people's faces when they try to figure out if they understand what I just said. God Bless, JB
Culverhouse Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 1:51 PM
I like that last line.... never thought of it that way....I saw a moving...switch I think was the name, this couple were running but were in love. till several years later in friendship they found each other.
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 12:08 PM
A little different for sure..I see that your comment on my work was part of your poem or was that vice versa...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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