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Oh deer how sad, its *****, i betta change me undies, hermaphrodites in hevvin here, i'll be gone by monday:) The poet lurks in thee, the searching one can look an see, let it out babe, let it come, the words n ye are bloody one! I kno the feel of the lonesome wheel, when it only turns 4 you :) seek and you will find fresher deals, look till she comes, your heart it feels, so bright n new. never stop looking mate! Jack Ross surely know the feeling mate, staggering, steady in me gait:) your verse, immortality will bring, long after death does surely sting, keep writing the good ones mate! Don sometimes the one appears, but she is not for me, i follow in her footsteps, but she's still running to be free, oh dear hehe. :) Don Johnson 17-july-11

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Date: 7/18/2011 5:16:00 AM
fascinating , don.. could i ask a favor?.. kindly comment on my latest poem called " chapter seven.".. i'm getting sytem errors for hours and would just want to know if there is a server problem here.. thanks loads!.. i can't reply to others as well:) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:23:00 PM
This is relly cute. Love playing with words mysdelf. I like to watch the looks on people's faces when they try to figure out if they understand what I just said. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/17/2011 1:51:00 PM
I like that last line.... never thought of it that way....I saw a moving...switch I think was the name, this couple were running but were in love. till several years later in friendship they found each other.
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Date: 7/17/2011 12:08:00 PM
A little different for sure..I see that your comment on my work was part of your poem or was that vice versa...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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