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Poe's First Love

Woe, unto this heart of men This mortal soul, I fear is weak I question God, is this sin? Bold I was, now humbled and meek Forsaken by the breath of life My lungs betray my need to breathe My heart is pierced by an unseen knife A foe, my mind cannot perceive My dreams held captive by enchanted smiles My hunger, a thing of the past My sleep now stolen by wicked trials A torment, that's unsurpassed What curse is this that leaves me maim, And renders my body weak? Does this demon have a name, That paints my future bleak? Alas, this wound will never heal It festers within a crippled soul 'Tis love that's robbed me of my will For I no longer have control

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/10/2011 2:15:00 PM
Wonderful poem about the impact Lenore had on Poe's writing, Larry. I especially wanted to express birthday wishes, having just read Ralph's poem of tribute. Hope you have a great day and manage to keep your mother-in-law at bay! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:39:00 AM
a lovely lamentation, larry! so full of stunning imagery and sentiments.. happy gemini birthday with huggggs.. just found put when i read ralph's comment below... have a grrreat one!:) nette
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Date: 6/9/2011 7:57:00 AM
Awesome, my friend. Sad and depressing but an excellent piece. Great job. HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Larry and many Happy Returns. I got one coming next Thurs (16th). Looks like great poets are born in June! Ha Ha. Have a great day. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 6/9/2011 5:51:00 AM
Cognac and Roses Thank you
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Date: 6/8/2011 4:16:00 PM
that was fantastic Larry, just fantastic
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