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To a father there may Not be a greater joy than A child who emulates Maybe even idolizes his dad. With a heart pouring over With love my youngest boy Proudly states, “I have written a poem.” My heart soars and love overflows … His next words reconfirm what I suspected; he wants to be like dad He asked me to post it on Poetry Soup. The next lines are his as I beam … Kind, nice, Outgoing, and Funny this is How I live in this strange World. I live With a funny family always cheering me on I go to a big school always being great I have many friends Always being Awesome intelligent People, I go to a nice church always being kind I really like my life in this very strange world. I couldn’t have said it better Little man. A collaboration of Dad (60) and David (10) Eklund

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 8:47:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Walayee's fine contest Jeff .....:)
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:01:00 PM
Great Job Jeff, Congratulations on your success in Lay's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/17/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest Jeff. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:34:00 AM
Congratulatios on the win in the contest of walayee, jeff
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:56:00 PM
Congrats Jeff on your HM in Lay's cool collaboration contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your very special honor tonight...
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Date: 4/1/2011 6:15:00 AM
So adorable Jeff .. a joy to see a child writing poetry too.. two of my five sons write poetry as a hobby to their lives .. one composed a book with me for children.. such a great project .. enjoy this great gift your child has inside and encourage him to continue luv.. enjoyed your wonderful words ..wishing u a happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 4/1/2011 5:16:00 AM
Another week has come and gone and I haven't been able to read as much this week as I had wanted. I am glad I was able to read your poetry today Jeff. Keep your pen scrolling don't let the ink dry up. I hope you have a wonderful weekend of sunshine and joy and find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2011 3:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:59:00 PM
proud dad you must be be, stephen.. oh he took after the mom, just kidding.. such bliss to have a child like you who has a penchant for poetry... and a rival in the very near future! amazing..:) huggs
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Date: 3/31/2011 2:51:00 PM
Father and son collaboration you should be proud, I have 4 children and none of them show an interest in writing the entire time I read this I was smiling Thanks
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