Poem To Myself

Poem to Myself

You ask to be birthed,
when you know I have passed
the age of passion to sing anything
sweeter than a harmonious hymn.
My taste for life is hollow blue
and all I know is hawks flying and lilting leaves falling.
There is no honey in the suckle.
If I were awake, I would sing of 
blackness and morning star,
being beautiful, heritage of queens,
mama songs and Tennessee,
knowing full well that there’s 
no place, no ears, no eyes.
I am the scorned sister.
I write words and dream.
I look at a group of trees in summer and see
that wonderful, magical country,
to which I never go.
Is that who I am?
The newspaper can't tell my future and
for a twenty-dollar phone call to a psychic
will there be hope, a while. 
Yes, my precious self,
you ask to be birthed
yet you hide your real face
behind the white peaks of a
daily psychotropic cocktail,
parasites of the mind that suck the senses.
Oh, but if you break free,
if you get to feel,
just once
limitless wonder 
WOW!

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Date: 4/24/2021 7:24:00 AM
Janis, it has been a while since I've read your poetry, sorry, no excuses. I'm so happy I saw this today. Your poetry is deep with meaning and filled with wonderful phrases.
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Date: 4/23/2021 3:18:00 AM
This popped up today. So i read a few more of your poems. What a wonderful flow and style( voice!) you have. I am a follower now.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 4/23/2021 6:33:00 AM
Nice to meet you rena. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Welcome to my group of followers also. I appreciate the depth and insight in your comments. Thanks,, Love and Peace Janis
Date: 10/27/2020 1:16:00 PM
Oh my goodness...what a poem! This poem read like Angelou and tugged at the strings of my heart. Such richness and depth. Thanks so much for writing these words!
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Date: 10/23/2020 2:28:00 PM
I can see why PD loved this so much, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2020 2:23:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing thing... making me reflect as well... God bless you.
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Date: 10/22/2020 10:44:00 PM
Deep and artistic, poetic and soulful. Some great writing, Janis, congrats on your wonderful win! ~ John
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Date: 10/22/2020 6:38:00 PM
Amazing poetry, honoured to be placed within reach of such artistry. Harry
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Date: 10/22/2020 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Janis , on a beautiful with great imagery and emotions. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2020 11:36:00 AM
Big Congrats to win TOP. Blessing
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/22/2020 1:06:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Anisha. Blessings in return. Janis
Date: 10/22/2020 1:38:00 AM
Congratulations, I was impressed. Janis, this is definitely a fav for me. I was nearly on my 5th line when I said "WOW!" I knew that very moment it would be on the top. I smiled, at the way you ended the poem, "WOW!" Thank you for entering my contest. I truly, love this, and I will add it to my favorite poems. LOL, haven't' had a super fav in years. Have a nice day ... LINDA
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/22/2020 1:12:00 PM
Linda, your contests have been an inspiration to break free, get in touch and just write. Thank you so much for allowing us to reach back and not reinvent the wheel. I am honored to be one of your favs.
Date: 2/3/2019 8:10:00 PM
Janis, this poem is brilliant! Sometimes we're our worst enemy. If we'd just allow that person of potential that we see inside of ourselves to "break free" we would "get to feel, just once. limitless wonder. WOW!" for sure :) A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 12/29/2018 9:38:00 AM
Hi Janis, I really enjoyed this write. Thanks for sharing:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/29/2018 9:15:00 AM
This is so well done Janice, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 12/29/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thanks John.
Date: 1/5/2017 1:37:00 PM
Love poems about poems. Love this great write. Congrats Janis! :-)
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Date: 1/4/2017 10:31:00 PM
Awesome poem. I love the humour in it. Congratulations, Janis.
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Date: 1/5/2017 11:19:00 AM
Thanks, Afzal.
Date: 12/2/2016 11:57:00 AM
Terrific Janis, congratulations...
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Date: 12/2/2016 5:20:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 12/1/2016 10:28:00 PM
Great work and congrats on in the contest. Thank you for participating. -- Wesley C.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 12/2/2016 5:22:00 PM
A very interesting contest for me because I learned all about James Tate. Sorry I didn't hear of him when he was living. Thanks.
Date: 10/17/2016 6:03:00 PM
This is really very cleverly done. I love the whole idea of it and I find it AWESOME.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 10/18/2016 12:31:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Free verse experiments.
Date: 10/16/2016 9:56:00 PM
Mrs Janis, for some reason I find this very funny. I absolutely love it!
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Date: 10/18/2016 12:32:00 PM
Good. Thanks, Daniel.
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