Poem on a String

Poem on a string hangs there delicately ~ before taking wing

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Jeanette Swan

Date: 7/9/2024 3:51:00 AM

Not just a senryu, this also has a 'livingness' and feels like decorative origami in words. Fave. J :)

Karen Croft

Date: 7/9/2024 2:09:00 AM

Love your senryu Gershon.

Karen Jones

Date: 7/8/2024 10:48:00 PM

This is so cool! Love the imagery and execution of the idea!

Regina Elliott

Date: 7/8/2024 3:14:00 PM

Love this Senryu, Gershon. An airy gem. Have a grand July week full of creativity. Shalom u'vrakha to you and your's. ~

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2024 5:20:00 PM

And you too, Regina. Thanks for the wishes and the shalom! :) Gershon

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/8/2024 11:35:00 AM

Hello Gershon, My brain has no idea what to create. I have to wait and see what happens. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/9/2024 10:25:00 AM

Hello Gershon, okay i will do that. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2024 5:27:00 PM

Just relax, chill, kick back, and watch your brain teem with ideas, Darlene!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/8/2024 8:29:00 AM

My poems are all on a wing right now. I hope my brain gets into gear.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/8/2024 5:25:00 PM

Just wing 'em, Hilda. Let 'em rip! ~ Propellor Man

John Lawless

Date: 7/8/2024 4:27:00 AM

another addition to the Gershon poetry mobile

Deb M

Date: 7/8/2024 1:10:00 AM

Before taking wing straight to P.S where l have discovered it! Lovely sweet delicate write BB!! Debx