Poem of Poems

The sun will shine brighter tomorrow when
we humans shake off shackles for tribalism 
when we understand the importance of our
stewardship of our planet and it’s eco systems,
when we can exchange greed for generosity,
hate for love, jealousy for sympathy, war for peace 
then and only then can we plan for the future 
please let the sun shine much brighter tomorrow.

6/26/2018
Poem of poems contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/3/2018 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this prayerful poem. :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 7/4/2018 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Susan much appreciated. :))
Date: 7/3/2018 5:50:00 AM
Roy, thank you so much for entering my contest and being a part of this...Congratulations with you win and many thanks...God Bless...Charlie
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Roy Pett
Date: 7/3/2018 6:12:00 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and giving me the opportunity, thoroughly enjoyed writing this. :))
Date: 7/2/2018 10:52:00 PM
Roy, you've produced the best exchange rate the market has ever seen. May it arrive swiftly and last eternally! Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ Gershon
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Roy Pett
Date: 7/3/2018 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Gershon, if we can all work towards the same goal peace then we all win, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Date: 7/2/2018 10:43:00 PM
Roy, this is the epitome of how the sun would shine brighter should it take place. I pray that it will take place --- even in our lifetime. Congratulations on your win.
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Roy Pett
Date: 7/3/2018 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Curtis, If we are to survive things must change like the quote, The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with One Step, we need to take that first step now, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Date: 6/27/2018 2:02:00 PM
Roy, this poem with its important message matches my sentiments exactly. I hope to see this entry at the top! : )
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/27/2018 3:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Connie, I think and would hope that the vast majority of us just want to live in peace and a decent existence, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Date: 6/26/2018 12:58:00 PM
Well said Roy, if only everyone would pull together, we can but live in hope. It's heartbteaking to see what is being done to our World , selfishness' and greed is destroying our world. Tom.
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/27/2018 3:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom, it is heartbreaking, I think we have the knowledge and technology to start putting thing right, but is there the will? Thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Date: 6/26/2018 11:15:00 AM
Please. Yes. Lovely done my friend, my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/26/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Maureen, depressingly sad, I keep going back Jacks musical fruit limerick to cheer me up lol, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :(
Date: 6/26/2018 8:24:00 AM
we have to live in hope and pull together Roy - would be wonderful if we live long enough to see this happen:-) hugs jan xx
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/26/2018 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I tend to write things like this then feel so hypocritical due to knowing that I have if only in small way contributed to the problem and feel useless as we have no influence to change things except moan, (sorry for the rant) I can’t see any political will to try and change our problems. Thanks again. :(
Date: 6/26/2018 6:38:00 AM
So many positive vibes in your poem. Sentiments well communicated, Roy. Best for a win.
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/26/2018 10:53:00 AM
Thanks Vijay for your very kind comment and best wishes much appreciated my friend. :)
Date: 6/26/2018 6:09:00 AM
We cannot shake off anything until we first shake off hypocrisy! Those leading the charge for a cleaner brighter world need to begin to actually live what they preach!
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/26/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, Totally agree but I honestly can’t see this happening either, we live in hope but it’s action that’s needed like you said. :(
Date: 6/26/2018 5:35:00 AM
You ain't just whistling Dixie, my friend!!! A WINNER for sure!!!!!
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Roy Pett
Date: 6/26/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Jack, pity but can’t see any change in my lifetime, thanks again for your best wishes much appreciated. :))
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