Poem of Poems

The sun will shine brighter tomorrow when
we humans shake off shackles for tribalism 
when we understand the importance of our
stewardship of our planet and it’s eco systems,
when we can exchange greed for generosity,
hate for love, jealousy for sympathy, war for peace 
then and only then can we plan for the future 
please let the sun shine much brighter tomorrow.

6/26/2018
Poem of poems contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Congratulations on your win with this prayerful poem. :)
Pett Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Susan much appreciated. :))
Messina Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:50 AM
Roy, thank you so much for entering my contest and being a part of this...Congratulations with you win and many thanks...God Bless...Charlie
Pett Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and giving me the opportunity, thoroughly enjoyed writing this. :))
Wolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 10:52 PM
Roy, you've produced the best exchange rate the market has ever seen. May it arrive swiftly and last eternally! Congrats on your win in the contest. ~ Gershon
Pett Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:42 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Gershon, if we can all work towards the same goal peace then we all win, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Moorman Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Roy, this is the epitome of how the sun would shine brighter should it take place. I pray that it will take place --- even in our lifetime. Congratulations on your win.
Pett Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 5:38 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Curtis, If we are to survive things must change like the quote, The Journey of a Thousand Miles Begins with One Step, we need to take that first step now, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Roy, this poem with its important message matches my sentiments exactly. I hope to see this entry at the top! : )
Pett Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Connie, I think and would hope that the vast majority of us just want to live in peace and a decent existence, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Cunningham Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Well said Roy, if only everyone would pull together, we can but live in hope. It's heartbteaking to see what is being done to our World , selfishness' and greed is destroying our world. Tom.
Pett Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 3:02 PM
Thank you so much Tom, it is heartbreaking, I think we have the knowledge and technology to start putting thing right, but is there the will? Thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Please. Yes. Lovely done my friend, my best to you in the contest! xomo
Pett Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 11:28 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Maureen, depressingly sad, I keep going back Jacks musical fruit limerick to cheer me up lol, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :(
Allison Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:24 AM
we have to live in hope and pull together Roy - would be wonderful if we live long enough to see this happen:-) hugs jan xx
Pett Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Jan, I tend to write things like this then feel so hypocritical due to knowing that I have if only in small way contributed to the problem and feel useless as we have no influence to change things except moan, (sorry for the rant) I can’t see any political will to try and change our problems. Thanks again. :(
Pandit Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:38 AM
So many positive vibes in your poem. Sentiments well communicated, Roy. Best for a win.
Pett Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Vijay for your very kind comment and best wishes much appreciated my friend. :)
Man Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:09 AM
We cannot shake off anything until we first shake off hypocrisy! Those leading the charge for a cleaner brighter world need to begin to actually live what they preach!
Pett Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, Totally agree but I honestly can’t see this happening either, we live in hope but it’s action that’s needed like you said. :(
Ellison Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 5:35 AM
You ain't just whistling Dixie, my friend!!! A WINNER for sure!!!!!
Pett Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 5:45 AM
Thanks Jack, pity but can’t see any change in my lifetime, thanks again for your best wishes much appreciated. :))
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