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Podium Pisspot

Let the breathing become tough and the eyes quick shudder in rapping repetitions Metaphorically I'm fine In reality I'm screaming as an odd teaming of pupils gather here to bare witness take notes Chore up the damagers and skip past their throats Never mind Thought there was some talk of speaking up from someone who claims they heard something in the midst of whispered grunts Where would the false prophets sit if the subconscious is late to the carnival Where will the unconscious lay If the awake keep smashing up clocks Admission of the hull taking damage is a critical key for a passive aggressors daily intake of an optimists analytical glee Observe Change Reorganize But there will be change there will be a costly account of a victim and a differing view of what will occur Sprout the ideas to shout Dealing with clout Reeling from doubt It has to be made from the inside out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/21/2012 11:23:00 AM
Wow, I enjoyed this poem. Very interesting! Like the "metaphorically I'm fine" bit and etc! And the closing was great! Excellent verse. Always, Laura
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