Pneumonia In Duffy's Yard

Rabid amber leaves
scuffed the callous stone flags
in a symbolic melee of defiance,
December’s mist embraced
the noon of the day
summoned the arctic wind
to wilfully wail within the alley
howl heinously encircling the yard.
The long dark night that ensued
lingers still in one’s memory,
where bedside candles flicker
and rampant draught ooze beneath
the worm infested door
to provoke dancing flames,
before anxious hands bathe
a forehead ablaze with
winter’s corruption!

© Harry J Horsman  2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/6/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 12/5/2011 10:29:00 PM
Nicely written Harry. Congratulations on your win in John's contest
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Harry, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2011 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/19/2011 10:12:00 AM
congrats on your winning poem, I love the opening lines in this...
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Date: 2/19/2011 12:19:00 AM
Great entry Harry. Congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this.
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:00:00 PM
Harry this is awesome. many congrats for this win dear friend.
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Chris, harry
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:38:00 PM
Very nice..the last bit it just terrific..congrats. BG
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:13:00 PM
sick alone is NO fun? and wow can we feel how bad this was good write! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:07:00 PM
Very interesting take & very unique images pop into mind (enjoyed your title for this too), Harry-- really enjoyed the sprinkling of alliteration you put in here as well-- Super congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/18/2011 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving win in the contest, Harry! Awesome writing, as always. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:08:00 PM
Harry, nice to see you in the top 5, congratulations on your worthy fifth place honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:22:00 AM
Way to go, Harry! Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:24:00 AM
harry...always award winning gems from you. hip, hip, hurrah for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/18/2011 8:51:00 AM
Cool congrats Harry on your spectacular winning poem in the Winter Free Verse contest luv.. enjoy another amazing win for an awesome entry luv..
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Date: 2/18/2011 5:11:00 AM
The winter with its moments of beauty and corruption, beautiful poem~~
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Date: 2/18/2011 2:20:00 AM
METAPHORS...I love them=0) good write!
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Date: 2/17/2011 12:34:00 PM
rapid-fire expressipns that deftly decribes the action of your theme, harry... fantastic! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:16:00 AM
So much energy in this poem, Harry. The images are frightening, but also appropriate to dispel "winter's corruption." Very cool! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/13/2011 3:15:00 PM
oh, my goodness this reads so gothic. LIke House of Usher or something. A WOW poem for sure, harry. Glad I chose to see this one before calling it a night! (or an afternoon as the case may be) HIghest rating for this gem.
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:59:00 AM
a picture of winter like no other with delighful sprinkles of stunning images.. i chill with delight,harry... would surely rate at the charts!! good luck..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/12/2011 7:13:00 AM
Excellent Harry my friend.. a reading treat of intense passionate lines .. good luck in the contest with many metaphoric references throughout..luv... awesome as always so enjoyable to read with luv..
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Date: 2/12/2011 6:23:00 AM
Very descriptive of a person very ill..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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