Pneumonia In Duffy's Yard

Rabid amber leaves
scuffed the callous stone flags
in a symbolic melee of defiance,
December’s mist embraced
the noon of the day
summoned the arctic wind
to wilfully wail within the alley
howl heinously encircling the yard.
The long dark night that ensued
lingers still in one’s memory,
where bedside candles flicker
and rampant draught ooze beneath
the worm infested door
to provoke dancing flames,
before anxious hands bathe
a forehead ablaze with
winter’s corruption!

© Harry J Horsman  2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Harry. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:46 AM
Congratulations on your win xx
Quigley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 10:29 PM
Nicely written Harry. Congratulations on your win in John's contest
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations Harry, on your well deserved win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest " Free Verse For Winter". Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Puddifoot Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 10:12 AM
congrats on your winning poem, I love the opening lines in this...
Pettit Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 12:19 AM
Great entry Harry. Congratulations on winning in Chris's contest with this.
Mannan Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Harry this is awesome. many congrats for this win dear friend.
Mehta Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Chris, harry
Gorelick Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Very nice..the last bit it just terrific..congrats. BG
Guzzi Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 2:13 PM
sick alone is NO fun? and wow can we feel how bad this was good write! Congrad's Light & Love
K. Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Very interesting take & very unique images pop into mind (enjoyed your title for this too), Harry-- really enjoyed the sprinkling of alliteration you put in here as well-- Super congrats on your win :)
Haick Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving win in the contest, Harry! Awesome writing, as always. Always, Annalise
Freeman Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Harry, nice to see you in the top 5, congratulations on your worthy fifth place honor. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Way to go, Harry! Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful free verse. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 9:24 AM
harry...always award winning gems from you. hip, hip, hurrah for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Cool congrats Harry on your spectacular winning poem in the Winter Free Verse contest luv.. enjoy another amazing win for an awesome entry luv..
La France Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:11 AM
The winter with its moments of beauty and corruption, beautiful poem~~
Reid-Hansen Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 2:20 AM
METAPHORS...I love them=0) good write!
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 12:34 PM
rapid-fire expressipns that deftly decribes the action of your theme, harry... fantastic! :) huggs, nette
Devonshire Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 5:16 AM
So much energy in this poem, Harry. The images are frightening, but also appropriate to dispel "winter's corruption." Very cool! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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February 13, 2011 at 3:15 PM
oh, my goodness this reads so gothic. LIke House of Usher or something. A WOW poem for sure, harry. Glad I chose to see this one before calling it a night! (or an afternoon as the case may be) HIghest rating for this gem.
Onclaud Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:59 AM
a picture of winter like no other with delighful sprinkles of stunning images.. i chill with delight,harry... would surely rate at the charts!! good luck..:) huggs, nette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Excellent Harry my friend.. a reading treat of intense passionate lines .. good luck in the contest with many metaphoric references throughout..luv... awesome as always so enjoyable to read with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Very descriptive of a person very ill..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Sara
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