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Plucks a Yellow Rose

plucks a yellow rose and smiles as she sniffs its scent - - drops it as bees sting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Joe Maverick
Date: 1/12/2012 12:25:00 PM
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Yellow roses stinging bees, that's a write to please..!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/11/2012 3:06:00 PM
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[sigh] haiku is the form of the noun..what you have here my dear friend is 3 lines with 4 verbs when ever this happens you are sure to have tried to put too much in the image [the verse] here you needed to decide the subject? the woman, the rose or the bee? if a rose then it would be as brief as [a yellow rose/scenting the still air-- kneeling maid] that way I show and didn't tell why she knelt the reader assumes to smell..hope I'm being of help? Light & Love
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Bl Devnath
Date: 1/11/2012 8:17:00 AM
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One of the Nature's rhythm beautifully depicted, loved and enjoyed. bl
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/10/2012 10:20:00 PM
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YOu created a funny little picture of a mishap in spring!
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M.I.A .
Date: 1/10/2012 8:21:00 PM
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LoL, why yellow, any meaning or she mistaken it for the bee? cute piece jack. thanks for the visit
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/10/2012 2:35:00 PM
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Great cut..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Russell Sivey
Date: 1/10/2012 2:21:00 PM
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Ha ha, Jack, that is quite funny! Great form and display of your creativity! Awesome Work!!
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 1/10/2012 2:03:00 PM
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Lol. Sometimes something so pretty can still sting.
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Kash Poet
Date: 1/10/2012 1:05:00 PM
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Very nice haiku jack.No that is not baby Kash.That is poetry soup's face when the site was down.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2012 12:25:00 PM
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Antique yellow rose......Mmmmm....lovely.oxox love Anne-Lise
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