Plight of the Pickrel

There was a fat pickrel from Perth.
Saddled with little self worth.
He befriended a perch.
Who lived bye a birch.
Then ate him ,increasing his girth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Joe. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 12:42 AM
lol!!! Funny, Joe. Congrats on your big win. Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Congratulations, Joe, glad this well metered limerick made it to the top. Luv,Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Congrats Joe on your first place win in Debbie's contest with this creative write luv.. enjoy your top spot...
Mannan Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 7:54 PM
This sure was a winner. Lots of congratulations for this win
Calhoun Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 6:55 PM
LOL! YUM! Great limerick, Joe. BIG CONGRATS on your BIG WIN in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, Kory
Richards Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 6:24 PM
Great work, Joe. Funny !!!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
Dufresne Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 6:16 PM
I loved it Joe. A really classic Limerick. Congratulations to you . I bow to your performance on this one!
Mehta Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved first place in the contest, Joe
Johnson Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 5:30 PM
Great win Joe. Congratulations. Joyce
Pettit Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 5:23 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest.
Mehta Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 1:56 PM
Funny and humorous write with good images, good luck in the contest if it is for that, Joe
Mac Donald Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 10:22 AM
Fun and funny write, Joe! Lucky 'pickrel', would that make it double tastey? :) Best to you and yours, Love, Mikki
Guzzi Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 9:45 AM
By jove I think you've got it! Tricky pickeral that! Thank so much for the excellent entry. If you could would you leave me a comment on Raven's Plight & Black Out? Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Great Limerick..Enjoyed..Very creative work..Sara
Mannan Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 5:01 AM
hahaha. Good one Joe.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 12:35 AM
Hey, great limerick, Joe! LUv, Andrea
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