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Plight of the Pickrel

There was a fat pickrel from Perth. Saddled with little self worth. He befriended a perch. Who lived bye a birch. Then ate him ,increasing his girth.

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Date: 2/23/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 12:42:00 AM
lol!!! Funny, Joe. Congrats on your big win. Lainie
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Date: 2/7/2011 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations, Joe, glad this well metered limerick made it to the top. Luv,Andrea
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:55:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your first place win in Debbie's contest with this creative write luv.. enjoy your top spot...
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Date: 2/7/2011 7:54:00 PM
This sure was a winner. Lots of congratulations for this win
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:55:00 PM
LOL! YUM! Great limerick, Joe. BIG CONGRATS on your BIG WIN in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, Kory
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:24:00 PM
Great work, Joe. Funny !!!! Congratulations on a well deserved win!!
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:16:00 PM
I loved it Joe. A really classic Limerick. Congratulations to you . I bow to your performance on this one!
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved first place in the contest, Joe
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:30:00 PM
Great win Joe. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 2/7/2011 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Date: 1/28/2011 1:56:00 PM
Funny and humorous write with good images, good luck in the contest if it is for that, Joe
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Date: 1/28/2011 10:22:00 AM
Fun and funny write, Joe! Lucky 'pickrel', would that make it double tastey? :) Best to you and yours, Love, Mikki
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Date: 1/28/2011 9:45:00 AM
By jove I think you've got it! Tricky pickeral that! Thank so much for the excellent entry. If you could would you leave me a comment on Raven's Plight & Black Out? Light & Love
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Date: 1/28/2011 6:26:00 AM
Great Limerick..Enjoyed..Very creative work..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2011 5:01:00 AM
hahaha. Good one Joe.
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Date: 1/28/2011 12:35:00 AM
Hey, great limerick, Joe! LUv, Andrea
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