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sun on orange fur stripes shimmy into coolness the tiger he rawred* 9/3/2020 *my word for his gentle roar

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Dean Wood

Date: 10/7/2020 11:55:00 AM

Kim, You really saw this! That must have been something. I will give you the "rawed". I take poetic license to the extreme. Great haiku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2020 4:50:00 PM

Thank you, Dean! Loved it!

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/2/2020 7:04:00 PM

Beautiful description of a tiger, Kim. Wonderful words on courage, willpower and personal strength! Love, Angie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2020 6:59:00 PM

Thank you, Angela!

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/2/2020 6:23:00 PM

A picture perfect haiku, Kim. Love the "rawred" for soft roar.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2020 6:26:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra!

Tony Hargreaves

Date: 9/29/2020 11:52:00 PM

Hi Kim. I love this haiku and photo. A few words and lots of image. Tony

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/30/2020 6:25:00 AM

Thank you! Was a cool experience!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/7/2020 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful tiger picture to go with your wonderful write. Your animal is showing. Enjoy your win.................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2020 1:06:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Silent One

Date: 9/6/2020 4:34:00 AM

nice one Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2020 6:17:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/3/2020 5:42:00 PM

I think you envisioned that Tiger doing 'The Shimmy!' Wasn't that a dance craze right between 'the Frug' and the 'Freddy?'.... Oh, no, no, no. I remember now: Shimmy-shimmy coco-bop; shimmy-shimmy bop. Hey! ... Now THAT was a song, not a dance. But it was earlier than the Frug too. ~ Dated and Reeling, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 7:09:00 PM

Well, I got you up singing and dancing, roaring even...lol

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2020 1:37:00 PM

Love the imagery and that beautiful pic. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 3:02:00 PM

Thank you! Was so cool!

John Watt

Date: 9/3/2020 1:08:00 PM

Ooh, I love this haiku tribute to my fave animal! Going in my faves! Love the Kimvention of "Rawred". At my zoo there is a display for kids to press buttons and hear the different sounds tigers make to communicate. I shall have to write to them to include "rawr". Hugs ~ John

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 1:32:00 PM

It was a lovely sound! Thanks, John! So glad you enjoyed this!

V. Deepa

Date: 9/3/2020 8:51:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Kim mam:-) I am sure he enjoyed his bathe.. Rawred* Thankyou for always teaching new words:-) Keep inspiring us.Have a lovely day. Take care.Much love:-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2020 9:48:00 AM

Thank you, Deepa! It was a tiger purr. So cool to catch.