Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Pleasure of Translation

Brandywine, so warm and tender,
lends me a touch of pleasure.
veins like ivy, beautiful and green—
love an elixir of tranquility.

Vin de cognac, si chaud et tendre,
me donne une touche de plaisir.
des veines comme le lierre, belles et vertes—
aimer un élixir de tranquillité.

9/21/2021

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Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2021 at 10:01 PM See what Geoffrey said? I have no idea how to say it, but I want to. Kim Rodrigues September 28, 2021 at 6:36 AM Merci! Thank you :)

Geoffrey Brewer September 23, 2021 at 2:18 PM Quels beaux mots! En deux langues Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2021 at 2:42 PM Merci beaucoup!

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 21, 2021 at 7:06 PM This translates into a beautiful poem, Kim. I enjoyed both versions very much! :D Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2021 at 7:11 PM Thank you!

Line Gauthier September 21, 2021 at 2:32 PM Lovely, Kim ~ what a coincidence, both our poems are four lines too ! Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2021 at 2:33 PM You’re right. Oui! Oui! Thank you, Line :)

Robert James Liguori September 21, 2021 at 2:07 PM I wish I could speak french. It is French right? Elixir of tranquility is nice. Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2021 at 2:34 PM Yes, it is French :)

Victor Buhagiar September 21, 2021 at 12:01 PM Can't say I love hard liquor, but I prefer aged red wine, But then to each his own. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2021 at 2:35 PM Warmth, pleasure, beauty, tranquility, my friend!

Rico Leffanta September 21, 2021 at 11:28 AM encore? Capcha code is "V69" . . . . Kim Rodrigues September 21, 2021 at 2:36 PM I bet it’s good! ;)