Pleasurable Potion

PLEASURABLE POTION Voluptuous silver goblets suspended in space within his eye’s reach. 7/25/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2017 8:13:00 PM

I had to check and make sure you had done your monoku and then I saw this and remembered, you already have this gem for the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2017 8:52:00 PM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2017 5:45:00 PM

ooh la la THIS is great imagery, Kim!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2017 8:20:00 PM

Thanks so much! LOL...my husband was watching an old star trek. One woman was wearing a gaudy silver top ;)

Dean Wood

Date: 7/26/2017 10:18:00 AM

Oh, I agree with Victor. Water in the bottom of a desert well does you no good unless you can get your hands on it. Enjoyed this Kim! - Dean

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2017 11:29:00 AM

LOL!