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Please No More Carnal Mind

Lets grab of hold of throwing out hypo-Krissy double minded she made my heart cry spitting out the camel I swallowed a fly repented gained a brother oh my lets open the shutter lift up the window with out doubt casting it into drought let it not enter again the sexual innduendo speaking plainly with no more kissy-kissy

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Date: 1/16/2010 12:38:00 PM
John, interesting thoughts that you have penned here. I especially like the line "spitting out the camel! I swallowed a fly". Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem "Shattered". Your ideas about its meaning was close to the meaning that I had in mind. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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