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The feeling of being trapped with an unknown Maybe a very hungry polar bear or a greedy wolf ... the beasts bites A tragic view where people pass by all the time See me, hear me ... come in to me and touch me Let me live my life A round room with a constant snow storm My body and brain block everything around me creating a vicious bubble Like being locked up in a prison I am a restless soul groping in the blind "Hello ... is anyone here? .... H.E.L.L.O" - behind the glitter of this secluded place in no man's land "Let me out ... Please ... Let me O.U.T"! I want to go home to my family for Christmas Longing for freedom Freedom without glass walls 20/11/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Stuck in a Christmas Globe Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Bobby May 1st place in the contest

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/27/2020 5:29:00 AM

A snow globe with a difference ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:01:00 AM

- Many thanks Kai, for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/13/2019 6:58:00 AM

Congrats my friend on your win in this contest. This one deserved to be at the top.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:00:00 AM

- Many thanks Chris, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 12/13/2019 4:49:00 AM

Sincere congratulations on your win in Bobby's Christmas Globe contest, Anne-Lise - keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings! :o) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 6:00:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/12/2019 11:13:00 PM

Sunshine congrats on your win!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 5:59:00 AM

- Many thanks Brenda,for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/12/2019 9:55:00 PM

Hello is anyone out there...hellooo! Congratulations, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 5:58:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Na Na

Date: 12/12/2019 6:56:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 5:58:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Greg. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 12/12/2019 2:39:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I swear I did not know this was yours but I felt your poetry through your words!! GREAT JOB Sis!! #1

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/27/2020 5:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2019 6:53:00 PM

very creative take on the contest. Not a cheery snow globe!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:10:00 PM

- Andrea, many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/22/2019 12:01:00 PM

Your imagination is intense my friend, this man is trapped who will help him get home for Christmas his anxiety mounts, HELP someone! Excellent creative, thought given work. Love it, a fav. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:09:00 PM

- Many thanks my friend Jenny - for visiting, the fave and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 11/21/2019 2:37:00 PM

I feel the angst... you did this so well..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:08:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/21/2019 12:36:00 PM

A stimulating "globe" poem here. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:08:00 PM

- Many thanks Matthew, for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/21/2019 9:30:00 AM

Anne-Lise, This global poem is intriguing. Why don't we give it a good shake? -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:07:00 PM

- No, don't shake ... he will fall down from the mountain poor man !!! - Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/21/2019 12:00:00 AM

This is one of the best I have read so far for the contest. I expect it will do well. Hugs Rick.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:05:00 PM

- Richard, many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/20/2019 9:55:00 PM

Very well done, Anne-Lise. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs // Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:04:00 PM

- Many thanks Charlie, for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/20/2019 7:48:00 PM

very original and well crafted (love the pic you chose) one can see this...i don't think i'd care to be trapped inside...i don't like being trapped in the house during a snow storm, yet i don't like being outside in one either... wonderful penning :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:04:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/20/2019 4:24:00 PM

Nice penning Ane-Lise, like the rest making comment I wouldn't want to be inside a globe but fine piece.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:03:00 PM

- Gordon, many thanks for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/20/2019 3:39:00 PM

I like the way you gave feelings to the one trapped in the globe, Anne-Lise--the sights and sounds in your poem evoke angst of being locked in. Well written--a sure win for you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:02:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Midnight Aurora

Date: 11/20/2019 2:23:00 PM

This is haunting. Many feel like this at times...on display and trapped. Yet from the outside looking in, it's all sparkles and dazzling. Great poem for the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:02:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Aurora :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/20/2019 1:47:00 PM

This was fun and fantastic my friend. I don't think being trapped in one of those thing would be anything I'd want to experience. Maybe a beach globe. : ) Best wishes in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:01:00 PM

- Many thanks Chris, for visiting and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/20/2019 1:38:00 PM

Great take on the contest theme Anne, good luck. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2019 1:01:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting and your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)