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Please Leave me Alone Please leave me alone, must be on my own Sad to say today my true love has flown Feeling sad and blue, my severed heart aches I’m in bits and there’s no one I could face. No cares, no despair or troubles at all Love of my life, here I sit and recall How my heart flipped with each luscious kiss Memories of joyful days filled with bliss. Enchanted balmy nights beneath moonlight We’d stroll round the lake till way past midnight The only sounds the hooting call of owls And ripples of waves upon the lake swells. I remember baking cakes together Making pastry finer than a feather For many reasons I loved you dearly Is it honestly over completely. Loving gestures come to mind unbidden Romantic words in the poems written The magic moments I’ll never disown Must be on my own, please leave me alone. 8th November 2021 (((( Fiction ))))

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Silpika Kalita

Date: 11/12/2021 4:31:00 AM

So beautiful! Sometimes I loss words to appreciate a beyond visionary compositions, always feel that yours poems are a feast to the senses, give any blank canvas, you can fill it with the vivid colours of passionate poesy! Kudos! Hugs Silpika

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/17/2021 9:59:00 AM

So kind of you Silpika, truly appreciated… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/10/2021 3:40:00 PM

This is a fantastic piece of writing about a fundamental sentiment! You did an amazing job!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/17/2021 9:58:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad, very much… Belle

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/10/2021 8:24:00 AM

Best wishes, Belle. I love the fictional poem, Awesome verses Panagiota

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 7:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Pangie, I hope you are recovering well from your injury. Take care, Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/9/2021 1:40:00 PM

Ars longa, vita brevis (Art is long; life is short). Masterful, Belle! :) gw

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2021 3:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon, I truly appreciate that… Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/9/2021 6:05:00 AM

Hi Belle, You have penned such a sad love story that many can relate to. When a love such as this is gone, one just wants to be left alone. Thank goodness it's fiction. Have good day-Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2021 6:49:00 AM

Hi Alexis, fiction though this poem is, I’ve seen enough heartbreaks to know how deeply they hurt. Thank you Alexis, have a good day yourself… Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/8/2021 10:42:00 AM

This is an excellent write of a universal emotion! Well done! Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/8/2021 2:07:00 PM

Delightful comments, thank you very much Rico… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/8/2021 2:55:00 AM

Belle your poems are so wholesome each one a journey within your life - your poetic skills span across you life, much the same as mine, and even when it comes to Mars we think alike! Hugs and blessings my friend, Jennifer

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/8/2021 2:03:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, we do seem to think on the same lines, I remember how we both wrote nonsensical poems that included the Milky Way though we wrote them a long time apart. Fortunately for me this poem is fictional. Thank you for your encouragement. Hugs and blessings in return dear friend… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/8/2021 1:54:00 AM

He did not deserve you. Good riddance. Lost love is always popular.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/8/2021 2:30:00 AM

Thank you Victor though this is a fictional write thats written for the contest, I appreciate your thoughts… Belle

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/7/2021 6:35:00 PM

Dear Belle, your gifted pen spills the ache of heartbreak across the page with such tender yet potent poignancy. There is true beauty in the bittersweet reminisce of a lost love in this poetic piece of mourning. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/7/2021 6:55:00 PM

Thank you Susan, who would not be delighted by such an encouraging review, your words are uplifting and makes the writing worthwhile. Bless you dear friend… Belle