Please Dont Make a Big Deal of Me

Please don’t make a big deal about my birthday she said.
When you get to a certain age, you don’t want recognition.
She was wearing a pointed hat at the time.
I like to be incognito she lied.
Her six bracelets and fourteen rings begged to differ.
She was wearing a navy-blue strapless gown.
At her age it was remarkable, no one her age does this.
Of course, we do not know what age it is.
The necklace around her neck was a signature piece.
Louder and prouder than any necklace I have ever seen.
Her dangling earrings were fashioned from a designer.
Right, her sons said. “No attention tor you, Mom.”
Her daughters-in-law could not wait to get to the garden to discuss her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Ha, ha, ha! Such a secure woman, that there!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 6:18 AM
For sure!
Bauer Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 12:57 PM
ha! i love how you describe people, caren! you say it all with just a few quick observations...
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 6:18 AM
I have to admit I am an avid "sneaky" people watcher!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Love all the goings on! Awesome
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Thank you Kim
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