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Please Don'T Leave

Please don’t leave me with this music to hear With your voice singing all those loving words in my ear Please don’t take my heart with you So there is nothing at all left to share From my words, only you really know what I care It started at another time, our souls connected by fate Please don’t tell me now, that it is all too late As if sunrises mean nothing and colors are dim As if no fun can be created on a single whim Because I don’t believe all that, there’s a special knowing And we were lucky to have a starlight of special showing Heidi Sands 1/2/20

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Date: 1/6/2020 12:49:00 AM
Such beautiful work..! glory be..peace, keep it up :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/6/2020 5:26:00 AM
Thank you very much Muddasar :)
Date: 1/5/2020 5:05:00 PM
Nice poem! Like a Lot!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2020 5:52:00 PM
I am happy to hear that Timothy. Thank you. Have a good night :)
Date: 1/5/2020 2:02:00 PM
Wonderfully done in all respects dearest, Heidi! Hugs xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/5/2020 5:52:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios. I like to see your comment tonight. Hugs :)
Date: 1/3/2020 8:18:00 AM
Thank you for sharing the wonderful poem, Heidi. Charlie
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/3/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Charlie and you are welcome :)
Date: 1/2/2020 5:33:00 PM
'a starlight of special showing' --- promised so much more. Beautifully penned, Heidi! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/2/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Gershon. I Hope you have a nice evening :) (and so much more ) lol!
Date: 1/2/2020 5:10:00 PM
This is so beautiful and charming--I enjoyed the rhythm and the words of love and longing. Excellent write, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/2/2020 6:55:00 PM
Vijay, your comments are so nice. I appreciate them. Thank you :)

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