Please

Today in this fast paced world,
manners seem to be lost
Where have they gone,
can we find them and bring them back to life.
Growing up manners was part of life and breathing,
bad manners got one punished.
The first word a child would learn was please,
followed by thank you.
If a child dared not say please,
they would get nothing.
A child would learn quickly,
please and thank you made their world go round.
Today these words are not used,
so they left town.
Riding off into the sunset of time,
like many other important words.
Only when manners come back into our lives,
will these words come riding back into our towns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:36 AM
Paula, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Goldsmith Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 7:56 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Please" write. Good manners are important. Thanks for your contest with the "P" word. An honor for 3 Place. Have a blessed/great day.....................
Gasun Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 11:27 AM
I absolutely agree my dear poet friend. So sad what's happening in the fast paced world. Another amazing poetry from your golden pen my dear poet friend. Congratulations on your win! Hugs. God bless you always for sharing. Have a great weekend my friend. Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Your words are so kind. Thanks. Glad you enjoy my write. Hugs... Have a blessed/great day.....................
Poet Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Lovely poem, Paula. Congrats on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoy reading this write. Have a blessed/great day.....................
Congratulations on your win in the Contest, Always enjoy reading your poems. They are so inspirational Good Works.... More blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 10:10 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoy reading my writes. That made my day. Hooray!!! Have a blessed/great day.....................
George Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 8:55 PM
You are so right Paula. Goodness of heart and good manners are quickly fading out . Congratulations on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Always good to see you. Yes, you are so right. A good heart/manners go a long way in life. Have a blessed/great day.....................
Lillico  Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 8:54 PM
Congratulations, Paula! Lots of norms left town indeed…
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Always good to see you. Yes, they rode out of town but need to come back. Have a blessed/great day.....................
May Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Those words are so important, Congrats on your win Paula
Goldsmith Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 10:04 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Three very important words that need to be used more often. Have a blessed/great day.....................
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 11:12 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:33 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you came back. Always good to see you. I did not know this was a win. Your note just made my day. Hooray!!! Thanks a million. Hugs... Have a blessed/great day.....................
Volumes Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Paula, one of the saddest things that these generations have abandoned is manners Once its gone, its harder to bring back, sadly. Your poem is a reminder of what we have lost. So well written.
Walimbe Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 2:29 AM
Sad truth... respect and manners are long lost. All the best and Hope you are doing geat Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you enjoyed my write about manners. Yes, it is sad that manners are long gone. They need to come back. I am doing OK/blessed. Hope you are OK/blessed. Have a blessed day............
Chuuk Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 9:18 PM
Some people just don’t care about manners anymore. It’s sad really… Great write, Paula. All the best in the contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you enjoyed my write on manners. They need to come back but think they are long, long gone. To bad. Have a blessed day............
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 4:56 PM
- Sad but true Paula ... manners seem to be lost ... I don't think they will come back ... a great poem - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your luck. Glad you like my write. Manners need to come back but think they are long gone. Hugs... Have a blessed day............
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