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Please, May I Walk Into Your Paradise With You - a Collaboration With Susan Ashley

Please, May I Walk Into Your Paradise With You - A collaboration with Susan Ashley Please, may I walk into your paradise with you with its streets of gold and bright skies of blue? My darling, you are in my sorrow-filled sad eyes your kiss, honey in my ecstasy cries! This true love, its bliss must be heaven sent for your love, I'd all my dark sins repent Please sweetheart, may I hold you tighter every night always be with you, never lose your sight? My dearest, your heavenly beauty, this soul saves your romantic ardor, pleading heart craves! This true love, its bliss must be heaven sent for your love, I'd all my dark sins repent Succumbing to passionate powers, your love's charms Please , may I forever rest in your arms? My angel, I swear we will never be apart our love is shown on every new star chart! This true love, its bliss must be heaven sent for your love, I'd all my dark sins repent Dance with me where petals sing for you, delicate with desire. Without you I’m desolate. Let’s rhythmically entwine, leave lost tears behind - nectar sipped from flower’s cup will remind.. 'Tis true my love, our love is heaven sent your heart is mine there’s nothing to repent. With wild abandon take me in your lusty whirl where a kaleidoscope of stars unfurl, our silhouettes left tremulous neath sky’s love-lights midst fireworks that satisfy appetites. 'Tis true my love, our love is heaven sent my heart is yours there’s nothing to repent. Stay with me forever, earthly and then beyond magnificent and magical our bond. Wearing naught but sweet swaths of light’s sheerest stardust we’ll travel time in tantra wanderlust. 'Tis true my love, our love is heaven sent our love lives on there’s nothing to repent Robert J. Lindley and Susan Ashley (a collaboration) May 18, 2019 *Tantra; a set of spiritual practices that direct the universal energies into the practitioner, thereby leading to liberation. Meaning "to weave" in Sanskrit, the term is derived from two words: tanoti, which means "to stretch" or "to expand," and trayati, which means "liberation."* .......... Poet's Note- Susan my dear friend, this has yet again been a true honor to compose this poem with you. With both of our schedules so busy it took many weeks but was well worth the effort and a great pleasure along the way. My your wonderful pen forever gift the world with your fine verses and immense poetic talents !!!

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Date: 6/6/2019 6:07:00 PM
Hello Robert and Susan, you both did a beutifullly great job on this romantic poetry. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 5/22/2019 7:57:00 AM
Beautiful! Reminds me of the Song of Solomon. Especially love these phrases: "kaleidoscope of stars" and "sweet swaths of light’s sheerest stardust"
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/22/2019 5:38:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Very high praise indeed, the Song of Solomon comparison you have so kindly made..
Date: 5/20/2019 6:44:00 PM
The art of two sharing magic in the words of love. My compliments!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/22/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Your kind comment is indeed a gift and an inspiring message to us both as we continue to write together.
Date: 5/19/2019 12:34:00 PM
The heart petals open one by one.. Joy sends its rays and enrapture the soul.. the magic of your words work wonders on a sweet state of Love beyond words.. You offer a paradise of Love, Beauty, Artistry, generosity, depth, uniqueness.. to every ardent reader to admire, appreciate and aspire to! A masterpiece of great value and highest level of sensitivity and creativity.. Due respect given to both of you, dearest Susan and Robert, poets of grandeur and Beauty! Another gem and a FAV! Best regards
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/19/2019 4:27:00 PM
My dear friend, your wonderful and sincere reply is in itself a great gift, and fine poetry! We both are so very deeply appreciative of your very generous and wonderfully inspirational comment given to us in regards to this our newest romantic creation! God bless......
Date: 5/19/2019 11:18:00 AM
Wonderful poem my friends. Such eternal bliss. Just a great effort. You two create magic together. Thanks.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/19/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Poetic magic is truly a great compliment. Such can only be because my writing partner created such fine flowing, sweetly romantic verses to compliment this poor souls humble opening and its longings to relay love's deep blessings, intense feelings and oft divinely crafted gifts unto humanity.
Date: 5/19/2019 9:35:00 AM
Excellent poetry Robert and Susan..As always, I am in awe of your talents..together you write such wonderful and long rhyme poems.. serenading love and longing. Beautifully done..I am glad to save it as a FAV.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/19/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend. We are both greatly and truly honored by your kind words and especially so the wonderful fav. That you have found this so is indeed a welcomed and also a very fine gift to us both.
Date: 5/19/2019 3:11:00 AM
The atmosphere extends the sensual almost to the erotic... an excellent collaboration, well done to both of you.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/19/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you my friend. My superb writing partner inspired me to try to keep up with her and her many very wonderful and so poetically beautiful verses! I had to beg my muse for loads of extra help !
Date: 5/19/2019 12:09:00 AM
The dark master with a romantic heart. A very passionate and romantic collaboration Robert and Susan. You write so well together. Tom.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/19/2019 4:15:00 PM
Thank you friend. We did strive to give deep depths of romance and its wonderful emotions in this new collaboration. Very pleased to find that you think we did so well in that poetic endeavor!!
Date: 5/18/2019 10:46:00 PM
A true song of love, physical and metaphysical. Oh, how I love these refrains as if the whole world repeated the poet's words as a spell. If this is not fav, what is fav at all. P.S.: Susan is a goddess. Or a tantric master)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/19/2019 4:13:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Your kind words and fav is truly appreciated and true a goddess of poetry my dear friend Susan truly be...
Date: 5/18/2019 7:40:00 PM
My dear friend, I am ever enchanted by your romantic muse. Thank you for your invitation to spill passionate poetic ink, it is always my utmost joy to create poetry with you, Robert. Your artistry never fails to stir and inspire my muse, and for that I am deeply grateful. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/19/2019 9:47:00 PM
I am humbled and honored by the beauty of your reply to my comment, my dear friend.. the power of your sweet inspiration is indeed as appreciated as a shading Tree on a hot summer day in July. You are a generous and mighty oak, Robert!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 5/19/2019 9:24:00 PM
Thank you, Kurt, I relish your kindness and your shining comments. I humbly follow in the light of Robert's luminous inspiration. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/19/2019 4:11:00 PM
Thank you dear friend. You know tis I that must give the greater thanks. As in the case of the Artist, the glimmering Rose and the shading Tree, you are the beautiful Artist, Poetry is glimmering Rose and I am just the shading Tree on a hot summer day in July.......
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 5/19/2019 1:22:00 AM
Susan, this is the highest poetry and the masterful work. Rays of respect)

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