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Pleasant Scents From Childhood Memories

It was pleasant every time we went to grandpa and grandmas. We woke up in the morning with the smell of fresh baked bread. Wouldn't cause much for all of us and grandpa to pause whatever we were doing and ran when, "It's ready." was said. Slices of bread smothered with butter and jelly souls were fed. Grandma would fill the wringer washing machine with cold water from a hose hooked up to the house, I enjoyed watching it agitate getting the clothes clean. We hung them out in the backyard on the clothesline and rouse the sunshine to dry giving them a fresh air scent especially my blouse. Now that I'm older with my own family I try to keep those traditions. I use a bread machine instead of using my hands to knead bread. One of the few things I lend and provide myself to be ambitions. On sunny days, I'll hang my clothes out on the clothesline instead. These small things became quite real to me, I will never dread.
2/19/2018 Poetry Contest: 'The Scent Of Baking Bread, The Scent Of Clean Sheets Fresh Off The Clothesline' English Quintain : a,b,a,b,b Sponsored By: Sara Kendrick
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Medders Tobechi Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:16 PM
This is really lovely, Line. I am seeing many great winners on this list. All so well deserved. Congrats to you. Great nostalgia piece.
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Such lovely nostalgia Eve, congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Excellent, Eve! CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Wegman Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Great memories for a great many of us who grew up in large families and in the 1960's as children with clotheslines and ancient agitators! Wonderful work! CONGRATS!!! -Mike
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eve. Quite a nostalgic feeling.
Gupta Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations for the excellent win, Eve ...
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!
Haight Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Nice memories, wonderfully expressed in your lovely, Quintain, Eve. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Steele Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Great write, Eve. Nothing like Grandma's cooking. Congrats, well deserved.
Gentile Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Such a lovely poem and a wonderful memory, Eve!! Congrats xxoo
Talbot Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations Eve... Mick
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations Eve. Tom.
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Congrats on your work placing in my contest. I enjoyed reading about your childhood memories and present day continuation of some traditions. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Wonderful memories, Eve. I noticed you don't use the ringer washer either... Some memories belong in the past. Lovely read.
Tripp Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Beautifully scented memories here, Eve. Good luck in the contest. This is a winner
Gupta Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 6:56 AM
A nice regression to the spent garden, Eve ...
One Avatar
February 20, 2018 at 6:20 AM
What a beautiful nostalgic poem Eve..
Cunningham Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Brilliant Verse Eve, oh those long gone carefree days of our youth. Funny how certain smells stir old memories. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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