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Playing With Words Under Fire

She build a bonfire with her flaming words of love her arson thoughts were like a sulphur match of old igniting all who warmed themselves to her able, she was a wildfire burning out of control ; Then like a blown out candle on a birthday cake one day he left her side and extinguished the fire that consumed her soul and left her heart in choke; little women has no words only silence, begets her * She took to piracy as a fish takes to shallow water losing the carbon of her original palpate thoughts A disheartened squatter sitting by a campfire waiting for the gloaming, while playing with words under fire; as the sunset declined, the moon became a great big ball of fire * She matched her words with the flame of her true self as all the stars in heaven conspired with zeal & stealth. to teach her how to write again with steadiness and hope. The End. October 3, 2018

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Date: 10/6/2018 1:28:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Pixie.
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Date: 10/5/2018 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations for your win and what a great ending to the poem! :)
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Date: 10/5/2018 3:34:00 PM
This is a marvel Pixie! Congratulations on your deserving Second Placement! : )
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Date: 10/5/2018 4:44:00 PM
thank you Connie,
Date: 10/5/2018 1:49:00 PM
Pixie, all of my very favorite themes were included in this darling zealous poem! I am feeling so honored - bonfire, wildfire, piracy, it is like you turned my mind inside out and said what will be appealing? I like everything about it!
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Date: 10/5/2018 4:44:00 PM
Thank you for honoring me in your contest, It was a great idea to just give us one luminous ne liner and watch us hang our words on it, I had fun writing it,
Date: 10/5/2018 8:19:00 AM
Congrats, Pixie!
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Date: 10/4/2018 1:04:00 PM
Great poem, Pixie, :)
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Date: 10/4/2018 9:32:00 AM
damn what a poem, great first line Pixie.. Love how you expressed this one... One of your finest poems...
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Date: 10/3/2018 7:00:00 PM
A metaphor for life isn't it. Sometimes we build our world around someone and when they leave, it crumbles, Then we must learn to build again, except we learn to build walls around ourselves. You may have changed your name but your style is a dead giveaway. Nicely penned, PD:) I still love you:)
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Date: 10/3/2018 12:15:00 PM
A conspiracy of fire...great write Pix...love & fire...^WW^
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Date: 10/3/2018 7:14:00 AM
I hear the intensity of the words..the first stanza is especially captivating..glad she matched the words with the flame of her true self..keep the flame burning, friend.
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