Playing With Fire

When I met her I knew she was fire
She was way too hot for me to hold
There I hovered within her orbit
If I stayed close I wouldn't be cold

She captured my imagination
A long legged beauty beyond compare
All her curves in the right places 
A pretty face with long flowing hair

Pappa said I shouldn't play with fire
Otherwise I would surely be burned
The day I finally found my courage
I received this scar that I have earned

The thing about a beautiful woman
She gets hit on almost every day
The heat that I felt was turned to ice
She turned around and walked away

At seventeen, I was way too young
I was like a moth caught in her flame
When it came to playing with fire
I didn't know the rules to the game
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:31 AM
Congrats on the win, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram
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December 9, 2013 at 5:57 PM
Richard, , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:06 PM
I will check it out Linda. Merry Christmas to you. Hugs Rick.
Sirak Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 8:27 AM
We probably all got burned a time or two in our younger days. This is a lovely nostalgic write.
Lamoureux Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Thanks again Monterey.
Adams Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 2:38 PM
perhaps she had a rough life at home and couldn't play the game at the time... good job with this write, it flowed smoothly!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Hamilton Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 10:33 AM
nice flow Rick and romantically sensual good write Shadow x smile hug
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Shadow.
Onclaud Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 10:25 AM
ahha, gotcha, rich.. seems someone wants to relive his younger days!... deliriously handled... enticed!.. huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Hugs Back Nette.
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 5:40 AM
- We learn as long as we live ..... however, do not play with the fire of love. - A nice poem Richard. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 8:35 AM
Thanks for the luck Anne Lise.
Manassian Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 3:22 AM
Oh Richard..... :( I can't believe she burned ya! It should have been the other way around......Crazy woman! GRRRRRRR.....Oh well, live and learn. FANTASTIC write. Love your work!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Thanks Eileen. :o)
Mehta Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 12:58 AM
Playing with fire at seventeen, haha. Please give once over "to" in the second line "too hot" as it is for the contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 8:37 AM
Oops, thanks for spotting it.
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