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Rain beats against the window, as a little boy leans his forehead and little hands against the cool glass, staring, longing to go out. His eyes light with excitement; grinning from ear to ear, for down the hall by the door he sees his sister’s red and white polka-dot umbrella. Glimpsing around to make sure no one is looking, with quick steps he goes to the door. He rises on his toes, reaching and wrapping his little fingers around the doorknob. Slowly opening the door ajar, he seizes his sister’s umbrella. Pushing the button he pops it open and slips away unnoticed. The pitter-patter of rain strikes the umbrella he holds high above his head, as he runs across the yard to the old wooden bench in the pouring rain. Jumping he grabs a wooden slat and struggles to climb on the wet slippery bench, springing high his little feet finally makes it up. Bouncing up and down, screeching with enthusiasm watching the colorful rainbow, soaking wet, he holds on to the back of the bench.
9/3/2017

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Date: 7/1/2018 5:21:00 AM
It doesn't get any more adorable then this. An innocent moment captured by your wonderful poetry. Congratulations Eve. on your winning verse. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/1/2018 1:39:00 AM
Love it Eve, greT story telling. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/1/2018 12:58:00 AM
Yaaaay! Rain! Congrats on your win with this lovely little vignette, Eve. Viv x
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Date: 6/30/2018 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this cute poem. I could just see this happening. You tell a good story. :)
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Date: 9/27/2017 10:08:00 AM
This is such a lovely cute poem, Eve:)
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Date: 9/24/2017 2:00:00 AM
Excited n inspired.Trying to follow. Love
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Date: 9/18/2017 6:43:00 PM
absolutely delightful in every way Eve i will see if my muse can come up with a decent poem for you:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/18/2017 6:46:00 PM
I know you will, your talent excels Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 9/6/2017 7:20:00 PM
So sweet and cute :)
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Date: 9/4/2017 5:46:00 PM
Very beautiful Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2017 6:13:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur, as you see I couldn't resist the cutest picture you had :)
Date: 9/4/2017 3:49:00 PM
Hi Eve, Reading this piece caused a warm feeling in my heart. Your words complimented the adorable photo very well. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/4/2017 4:56:00 AM
Awe, that is so cute Eve, A picture of millions of little boys across the globe. A happy thoughtful poem. Regards, Craig
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Date: 9/3/2017 5:15:00 PM
You wrote a very descriptive poem here, Eve. I can just imagine every detail of this gleeful child's delight in the rain.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/3/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I fell in love with the picture that was on Arthur's poem, "Norway Rains"
Date: 9/3/2017 3:29:00 PM
Picture is so cute! The scene so well described--well written poem, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/3/2017 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, ~`*
Date: 9/3/2017 1:35:00 PM
What a joy to read this Eve. ! Great descriptions. Well written :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/3/2017 6:07:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi, ~`*

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