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Playing In the Rain

Rain beats against the window, as a little boy leans his forehead and little hands against the cool glass, staring, longing to go out. His eyes light with excitement; grinning from ear to ear, for down the hall by the door he sees his sister’s red and white polka-dot umbrella. Glimpsing around to make sure no one is looking, with quick steps he goes to the door. He rises on his toes, reaching and wrapping his little fingers around the doorknob. Slowly opening the door ajar, he seizes his sister’s umbrella. Pushing the button he pops it open and slips away unnoticed. The pitter-patter of rain strikes the umbrella he holds high above his head, as he runs across the yard to the old wooden bench in the pouring rain. Jumping he grabs a wooden slat and struggles to climb on the wet slippery bench, springing high his little feet finally makes it up. Bouncing up and down, screeching with enthusiasm watching the colorful rainbow, soaking wet, he holds on to the back of the bench.
9/3/2017
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Rose  Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 5:21 AM
It doesn't get any more adorable then this. An innocent moment captured by your wonderful poetry. Congratulations Eve. on your winning verse. Have a great day.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 1:39 AM
Love it Eve, greT story telling. Congrats on your win.
Wigley Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 12:58 AM
Yaaaay! Rain! Congrats on your win with this lovely little vignette, Eve. Viv x
Gentry Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on your win with this cute poem. I could just see this happening. You tell a good story. :)
Daniel Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 10:08 AM
This is such a lovely cute poem, Eve:)
Dutta Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 2:00 AM
Excited n inspired.Trying to follow. Love
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:43 PM
absolutely delightful in every way Eve i will see if my muse can come up with a decent poem for you:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:46 PM
I know you will, your talent excels Hugs Eve ~`*
Downing  Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 7:20 PM
So sweet and cute :)
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:46 PM
Very beautiful Eve!
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Thank you, Arthur, as you see I couldn't resist the cutest picture you had :)
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 3:49 PM
Hi Eve, Reading this piece caused a warm feeling in my heart. Your words complimented the adorable photo very well. Excellent job:-) Alexis
Emu Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 4:56 AM
Awe, that is so cute Eve, A picture of millions of little boys across the globe. A happy thoughtful poem. Regards, Craig
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 5:15 PM
You wrote a very descriptive poem here, Eve. I can just imagine every detail of this gleeful child's delight in the rain.
Roper Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 6:05 PM
Thank you, Andrea, I fell in love with the picture that was on Arthur's poem, "Norway Rains"
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Picture is so cute! The scene so well described--well written poem, Eve!
Roper Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Vijay, ~`*
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 1:35 PM
What a joy to read this Eve. ! Great descriptions. Well written :)
Roper Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 6:07 PM
Thank you, Heidi, ~`*
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