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Playground of Time

. * . Smiles Displayed, bright eyes Seek laughter, time is on your side Diamond perfection from an old lump of coal Tomorrow is promise, the past is just Learning tools, today is the Playground ~*~ *

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Judy Ball

Date: 7/17/2011 2:29:00 PM

For sure we do learn so much as children just interacting with each other. Good job here. God Bless, JB

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/13/2011 9:52:00 AM

smiles from here too, Doris. very nice write.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 7/13/2011 9:20:00 AM

a sweet form and wonderful write, i don't always write because i don't have a laptop of my own, but my friends are always on my mind. i love you all.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/12/2011 5:46:00 PM

What a remarkable form! Fine work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dalila Agtani

Date: 7/12/2011 12:19:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this diamond verse! I agree with you we live to enjoy Today! Nice meeting you in PS. Dalila

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 5:18:00 PM

No lump of coal in my soup.. lol...but a playground of smiles .. wow...and yes! We have been seeing each other for more than a year... And I am one happy camper of time... Great poem... P.d.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/11/2011 11:35:00 AM

A good, thoughtful write. Poetic words of wisdom!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2011 8:24:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Doris. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/10/2011 9:39:00 PM

Lovely Doris, indeed, that lump of coal has wonderful surprises if left long enough. I love th analogy and insight here. Love, Elizabeth