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Playground of Romance

In her playground of romance,
swings of destiny swayed gently,
as a merry-go-around span endlessly,
so in a state of dizziness,
I crept inside, unaware, in my sleepiness,
I had been treading upon flowers beneath my feet,
as their fragrance faded, her spirit wept in echoes of betrayal,
but her tongue could not explain,
so, I gifted her three dahlias from my soul's oasis;
purple for prosperity,
red for passion and
white for innocence.

I can still remember the taste from
the first time I felt the moisture of her lips.
In a night where we held each other so tight,
we sizzled like the Sahara sun,
as heat kindled in our kisses,
we merged in the silent language of touch,
waiting for gravity to bring us back.
We were adrift without the need for words - 
in places poetry cannot reach.  

In our infatuation, following lanterns in the night sky,
I mistook our path of promises 
for an intimate illusion only found in dreams
and became misplaced in her self sabotaged storm,
until I was swept away with merciless waves.

Yet, yearning rests upon the tip of my tongue,
like breathless whispers.
If only she would come to me like dawn,
so I could kiss her like ripples at 5am and
once more feel the heartbeats upon her breast.

I turn half asleep,
reaching out into the emptiness,
as the darkness paints her silhouette in each corner,
flickering sentimental slideshows in my mind,
absorbing the angst of her absence.

Now I am nothing,
and she no longer remembers my name -
so what purpose is there to remain?

Ravens gather to the rhythm of a sad piano,
as my pulse beats wistfully among weeping willows,
leaving traces on my flesh like raindrops on stone.
Reciting the last paragraph, I ponder
if this is maybe the penultimate poem,
as we cannot find new verses to ink together.

But, our memories are stitched into the same seam,
so I'll wear her handwriting until heaven.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Crandall Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 8:33 PM
These powerful verses seem to reflect that you feel love and romance very deeply. I guess that can bring one to great heights, and great lows.
Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 3:30 PM
Love is a wonderful feeling and love gone sour is very painful. You write as one who has experience the full gamut.
Beaufort Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 1:24 PM
Silent One. Amazing how love can have such an effect on us. You really get to the heart of the matter and express the joy of love and the emptiness of loss. Reading this...I'm thinking about how I have experienced obsession and wanting to have adoration that was denied at times in my life. The amount of reflective energy expended to rectify this condition turned out to be enormous. The pain that we can experience isn't easy to resolve, but there's many messages in all of it. Sending you smiles!!
Villalon Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 8:00 AM
Love speaks in many silent and concealed ways... :) Cliff
Messina Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 7:57 PM
Love has come and gone for me twice, my friend. The cycle of true love... time will tell. Keep your heart open, brother. Good hearts get paid well. Nicely written... Charlie
Daniel Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 2:39 AM
Indescribable angst beautifully expressed here, SO:)
Chiri Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:15 AM
WOW! I think that word best describe this amazing piece! Bravo!:)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:09 AM
Wowww brilliant creative bittersweet romantic poem!! Kudos for this one s well!! >>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<~~~\\\¤¤¤««««»»»»»» Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
One Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:08 AM
Thank you..will check out your poem soon.
Proxenos Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 9:03 AM
Being in love is like a funfair, a playground of romance but sadly, passion, desire, and a dizziness which sends you into ripples of unending pledges can end sadly, betrayal is serious, you might feel let down, but someone, sometime, somewhere will recognize your feelings and find you, desire you and want you in her life, so that you become one. What a beautiful poem Silent One, I did miss your comments, they are always so apt and substantial, and weigh enormously, always. Hugs Jennifer.
One Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:08 AM
You are always too kind and I apprrciate you resprcting my comments..I miss your comments also...I hope one day someone does recognise my emotions..Always appreciate your visit..sending you blessings my friend
Kauffman Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Greetings SO! How wonderful to see you posting again! Not only do I read your poem with your signature imagery and creative word use, "memories stitched," but through these lines I experience the joy and the pain of lost love especially in the line "she no longer remembers my name!" All the best to you! Cheers and blessings!
One Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:05 AM
Awww you are always donkind :). Thank you for your visit and support..
Winter Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 6:17 PM
Dear S O, this poem is so brilliantly penned. They say that love heals but sometimes love leaves us with a heartbreak. The memories, they never fade, they stay with us forever. The yearning and the emptinesss is the hardest part to survive. It's so unbearable, it's like every cell in our body is begging to be in the arms of that one person we're in love with. Best, Anne
One Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:04 AM
You are right Anne, but we have to move on...as what is love but a second hand emotion..Thank you for your feedback
Parveen Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 2:17 AM
Hi Silent One,That was incredibly moving. I love how you used the playground imagery to show how easily we can wander into someone’s heart without realizing the weight of our steps. Takecare
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Tahira.... What is life but one big playground? Glad you liked that line, as a fellow poet criticised it... shows the abstract nature of poetry.. Next time we need to make sure our steps are not too much of a burdern..
Seeker Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 8:46 AM
First, to mark as a fav. Ok, done. Fabulous! Enjoyed every nuance, each tremor. Thanks for sharing, Silent One
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:14 PM
You are too kind.. thanks for the fav...
Hind Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:54 PM
a poem of longing, enjoyed reading... I hope it's not your last also
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Paige... I am sure there will be others soon.. Appreciate your concern and support.. sending you blessings..
Rodgers Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 7:34 AM
Hello Silent One, I imagined myself as someone walking back through a dream they’re not sure they survived, lanterns, dahlias, heat, then the long slide into... I like how the poem keeps shifting between tenderness and disaster, holding both in the same hand and not pretending they balance. I always enjoy a great poetic read in the morning. Blessings, Daniel
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Daniel, appreciate your feedback...
Poet Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 2:46 PM
This is so out of the norm and inventive. The page is filled with words that are delicious and sensitive. I found your poem enjoyable, and I would like to extend my congratulations.
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:16 PM
Thank you Sotto..
George Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 1:41 AM
"we sizzled like the Sahara sun, as heat kindled in our kisses," A wonderful poem of sweet romance... its climax and its slow waning. By mischance, though the two are drawn apart, the memories still linger more powerful than before and the search for the missing link continues unto eternity. So beautiful and equally heartbreaking!
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:17 PM
Such are the trials of love my dear friend.... im sure one day they will sizzle like the sahara again, but maybe with new lovers.... Thank you.. sending you blessings dear soul..
Onclaud Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 12:39 AM
bittersweet notes drifting along the page...tenderly , S !
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Thank you
May Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 5:12 PM
"Waves swept the romance away, leaving flickering sentimental slideshows in the mind", Very nicely penned
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Thank you...
Amadore Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 2:04 PM
I enjoyed your poem and congratulate you on your felicitous "our memories are stitched into the same seam"...
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Thank you Leo...
Anaya Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 1:02 PM
Cinematic drops of impactful moments, pleasuring, risers adding absences drama and longing for more of what once sabotaging. Touching movements reaching a final ovation, leaving me in a saddened phase. Meloncoly & moving, SO hoping not your last~blessings
One Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 1:19 PM
Thank you Anaya, sadly so many love stories leaving behind a sad and melancholic scent... Appreciate your feedback... Sending you blessings as always..
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 12:33 PM
Very good stuff here, Silent One. Romantic as heck and ending on a sad sad note . I wonder sometimes if certain young men from my past remember me as fondly as I recall them in some of my poetry
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 3:37 PM
Thanks! I can't find a poem of yours I have not read so I am just commenting to replies you had made to me in the past but I don't normally see them.
One Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 12:54 PM
Thank you Andrea.. I am sure you made an impression on these young men and they probably think of you as the one that got away :))
Bartholomew Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 6:54 AM
This is beautiful and yet so sad, but your last line speaks volumes... which I absolutely love! "I'll wear her handwriting until heaven"... what we cannot physically carry here, we carry in our hearts and that is the most beautiful part!
One Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 12:53 PM
You hit the nail on the head my friend.... we carry in our hearts and that is the most beautiful part.. sometimes love is just not enough.. Appreciate you visit..
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