Play Ball

PLAY   BALL

So I’m behind the bleachers with Sue Ellen
And we weren’t calculating batting averages
And I says to  her baby you’re my home run
I’ve always dreamed about.

I know about first and second base
She said,  but what’s third base?
So I used the Abbott and Costello 
“Who’s on first” routine to  confuse her.

Between innings we had made some progress
But I was anxious to  clinch the game
Before some  pinch-hitter stepped in. 
I wanted to take the pennant.

She hemmed and hawed and delayed
Playing ball with me : what we had here 
“Was a failure to communicate” ,
And the home run seemed out of reach.

Till there was a hush from the bleachers.
Above us the voice, seeming of god,
Instructed her as what to do.
It said,  “Play Ball !”
	
That was my first turn at bat
And  the home run was delivered -
As the crowd above cheered wildly,
I believe,  for me.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Written  for  Debbie Guzzi's Contest  "Play Ball"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/4/2011 12:46:00 PM
Sydney, a worthy presentation...great to see your poem in the top ten list, Congratulations on your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/3/2011 11:46:00 AM
whatta game! ..CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/3/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's "Play Ball" contest Syd. Love,Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Interesting take on the contest Sydney. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/2/2011 10:13:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on a stunning win in Play Ball..luv.. enjoy ..another victory..
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:56:00 AM
goofy and woowie.. is this what you mean by K of C??( i'm brainless today).. well, it may win by sheer luck.. kidding!!. action-packed with caricatures dashing in between, syd.. go for the win, homerun! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:46:00 AM
May your inspiration be long lived and your life be filled with many wonderful years of writing and of sharing your excellent poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Syd. Love, Carol
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