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Planting Some Seeds

There's a reason that parents of toddlers, For the most part, are often quite young 'Cause the energy that they require Is the stuff of which odes should be sung. In a whirlwind of never-stop motion, They explore, they absorb and they learn; Though it's wonderful getting to join them, To our younger selves we can't return. So a grandparent lovingly caters To a grandchild's wants and his needs Hoping somehow, despite the exhaustion, The attention is planting some seeds. For with nurture and caring devotion, There will blossom a link that will keep, Which is worth all the time and the effort; Though it sure makes one yearn for some sleep!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/26/2016 6:40:00 PM
Nice long lines and pauses. You did well with this one Ilene. The story is good as well. I especially like the amount of information you crammed in a line and still kept a nice flow. Well done!
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Date: 4/15/2016 2:31:00 PM
Absolutely delightful Ilene and the seeds you sow in your relationship will blossom throughout your lives:-) hugs jan xx
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