Planets of the Lawyers

  
      A Martian ordered some Venetian blinds
      A Venetian ordered the Martian kind  
          The Martian installed a few
          The Venetian's lawyer sued 
       The Martian's did too ~ Lawyers' peace of mind
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 3:39 PM
ah, love the satire in this Limerick....you excel at being witty and making a point so concisely.
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 8:14 PM
Lawyers have to file briefs, so they ought to be brief as well. A. Tor Knee
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 5:21 AM
Pretty humorous! Love the twist of words! Suddenly the blinds fly high…well those of the Martian kind ;)
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2025 at 8:15 PM
Mars and Venus. Do you see my ----- genius. Ha, ha. Fooled ya. Merry Christmas, Kim.
Swan Avatar
December 23, 2025 at 9:32 PM
blind planets in alignment- lovely
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