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Planet In Peril

Our beloved Planet lies in peril... The Lords of Passion would decree. The weather's getting warmer As any fool can plainly see. But I hate to burst your bubble As Mother Nature takes her course. We be but a temporary infestation That for the moment sallies forth. The ice caps will lose their flavor As they've done many times before. Greenland will shed her icy shroud As crops ripen near her shores. Planetary change is ever constant And the seas will rise again. Permafrost will unleash its carbon treasures With her indifference to proclaim. Yes... the Planet's been much warmer As Romans and Vikings will attest. So belay your passions and prostrations And give your soul a rest. I will gladly join with my community As there is much we must affront. But as to the control of Mother Nature... That's a dog that will not hunt. Your desire to make this Planet Something it was never meant to be Where its moods cannot be purchased And cares not a fig for you or me. So put aside your hubris and naivety... With sweet ignorance to forsake. As whether we perish by fire or ice... It's Nature's call to make. The End * Obviously written from a secular position.

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Date: 5/7/2023 7:39:00 AM
David Thank you for not making points and for noticing poignant life and death remaking.
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David Mchattie
Date: 5/7/2023 3:32:00 PM
Thanks. It's a topic worthy of debate. Have a great day.
Date: 5/3/2023 7:11:00 PM
So insightfully true - our planet is in peril. And if we lose a huge glacier in Antarctica to climate warming, sea levels rise considerably. Coastal cities face dire risks. Oh for better news. Thank you for this timely poem. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 5/7/2023 3:30:00 PM
If history holds... we are looking at another 150 years of warming. Keep that bathing suit handy. Stay well my friend.
Date: 4/30/2023 11:16:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant poem, I love it. Very well written, very well said. I agree with the points you are making completely. ~ Clive :)
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David Mchattie
Date: 5/7/2023 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Clive. A lot of people are very passionate about the weather which they know very little about. If someone is going to tell me how to live my life... at least do a little research and not just parrot what the politicians tell you. Stay well my friend.
Date: 4/30/2023 7:42:00 PM
God set the seasons in motion. Mankind can create havoc here on earth, causing damage. We are not the one in control. This is so beautifully expressed and presented. My best to you, David. :) Hugs, Brandy
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David Mchattie
Date: 5/7/2023 3:26:00 PM
Humility is in short supply my friend. Our faith allows us to except what is meant to be. But a lot of people are going down swinging... clinging to their hubris and pride. Such are the times we live in. Have a great day.
Date: 4/30/2023 7:19:00 PM
Obviously, a brilliant write, David. So true, what you've written. All the eco-enthusiasts are tilting at windmills, no better than Don Quixote, methinks. Bravo for putting it so poetically!! Great stuff! FAVE for me. Thanks, gw
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David Mchattie
Date: 5/6/2023 10:20:00 AM
There was something called the Roman Warming period that lasted from 100 B.C. to 250 A.D. (RWP) and the Medieval warming period that lasted from 900 A.D. to 1200 A.d. (MWP) I think we are just in another of those warming periods. People can huff and puff all they want... but it changes nothing. Stay frosty my friend.
Date: 4/30/2023 4:55:00 PM
Hello David.lOL. Man cannot get along on earth with one another..since the planet began.Now we are going to control the oceans?Give me a break David it’s not gonna happen. Sure, this is Deist position. Nonetheless, loved your poem.your last line said it all. Great poem Pangie
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David Mchattie
Date: 5/6/2023 10:14:00 AM
I was just trying to say is some things are just out of our control. Thanks for stopping by. Have a great day.
Date: 4/29/2023 6:11:00 PM
I absolutely love it and agree 100%/ Excellent penning, David!
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/30/2023 2:17:00 PM
Its an important subject. It doesn't take a lot of effort to find how the climate has warmed and cooled for thousands of years. People just believe whatever crap CNN pollutes the air with. Stay well my friend.

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