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9/18/19

Contest:  Strand Special 3
judged 12/16/19

Contest:  Your Best Poem that is Trophy Worthy 2
Judged 10/3/19

I thought the landscape burst in sudden flame with embers wild cavorting in the glare of dawning sun, but boundless sparks became a throng of monarchs flitting through the air above a field as though on charcoal ash that gusts of wind then carry as they gyre. From wings illumined spread the brilliant flash of pixie dragons breathing threads of fire as fine as frog hair glinting in the slow emission of the morning's creeping light that struck the gloom with every lambent blow until each wizard shadow was in flight. The tartan tiger eye that draped the glade was blazoned on the pinions as they flew like flower petals of the clans arrayed in Lilliputian combat on the dew. A cadence of disheveled leaves they fell, these butterflies upon the turrets mean, escarpments and fay parapets to quell the mist ascendant from the April green, then rose again like prodigies from smoke that came to cloak them from the murky foe, kaleidoscopes of flutterings that broke the cling of darkness with emerging glow. By noon the burnished battle scene had cleared as dandelions waved their vanquished whites, the gleaming copper standards disappeared and I relinquished images of sprites.

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Date: 5/30/2021 3:19:00 AM
This one left me breathless. Wonderful phraseology. You created another amazing world that I was observing with total absorption. A FAV for me. Nice to meet you. SuZ
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Date: 12/22/2019 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Dale
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Date: 12/22/2019 2:59:00 PM
Dale congrats on a top win;)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/23/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thanks, Brenda.
Date: 12/22/2019 2:06:00 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read lately, what an imagination Dale, and your use of unique words and pairings is stunning, congrats on a top win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 12/23/2019 8:48:00 AM
Thanks so very much, John.
Date: 11/13/2019 4:51:00 PM
I love this, I love dragons. Had to "fav".
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Date: 10/26/2019 2:18:00 PM
What a wonderful imagination. To see the everyday mundane world in such vivid imagery is a gift.
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Date: 10/20/2019 5:14:00 PM
Great imagery... in Lilliputian combat on the dew. A fun piece!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/20/2019 6:43:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Kim.
Date: 10/3/2019 7:49:00 PM
(2) You will always be one of the greats of Poetry Soup, and will always be near the top of my favs list. I have missed seeing you "around" of late and pray you are well and all is OK. Wonderful, wonderful stuff ... please keep sharing your inspirations. Blessings!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 10/3/2019 7:57:00 PM
Greg, thank you so much for your kind words. They are much appreciated.
Date: 10/3/2019 7:46:00 PM
(1) This poetry "thing" is, for me, about IMAGINATION - it is the greatest tool we wield as writers, and the reader's imagination is the largest canvas we have opportunity to affect ... you, Sir Dale, have a greater grasp of that (and other crucial elements) than most others I know, and this is a perfect example. It's not just about imagery and metaphor, it's about using those things in creative, fresh and imaginative ways that make SENSE, and your work never disappoints ... (continued)
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