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Pitter Patter Falls (Haiku)

rushing waters fall
as of sweet rhythmic curtains,
draping moss and stone







Submitted for Raul Moreno's "Rhythm of The Falls" contest.

Copyright © Adell Foster | Year Posted 2009

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Sara Kendrick Date: 7/27/2010 4:08:00 AM Great write that so deserved a win...Congratulations...Sara Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 4/5/2010 4:34:00 PM A wonderful haiku. Login to Reply

Date: 11/4/2009 1:58:00 PM Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen Login to Reply

Brandee Augustus Date: 10/27/2009 1:18:00 PM I like your title and how you describe the water as "sweet rhythmic curtains". Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 10/24/2009 7:28:00 PM Dear Adell, Congratulations on YOUR placing in Raul's Contest with this well deserved Haiku YOUR Talent is Inspiring ALWAYS...HG Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/23/2009 3:53:00 PM lovely precise imagery! congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 10/23/2009 4:34:00 AM Congratulations, Adelle, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J Login to Reply

Moonbee Canady Date: 10/21/2009 9:05:00 AM Very Lovely haiku... I can See and Hear this Poem (and I Love Waterfall Scenes) MoonBee Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 10/19/2009 5:12:00 PM Good luck in the contest, Adell. This is a winner in my book ... smile ... Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 10/19/2009 9:29:00 AM Contratulations...I love your Haiku.. There were so many good ones...I'm glad I didn't have to judge...Marty Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 10/18/2009 9:24:00 PM Congratulations, Adell!! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Ismael Nieves Date: 10/18/2009 9:07:00 PM FELICITATIONS! on your win. ...curtains...draping... AWESOME imagery! Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 10/17/2009 2:49:00 AM Congrats on your success in the contest Adell.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 10/16/2009 7:56:00 PM Beautiful Haiku, dear Adell. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 10/16/2009 7:25:00 PM I can feel the spray from your image here. Nice work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anihs Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 10/16/2009 5:12:00 PM Congratulations on your WIN with this beautiful Haiku, Adell! Love, Robin Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/16/2009 4:36:00 PM A beautiful description and a winning poem! Congratulations, Adell!! Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Trudy Diane Rider Date: 10/16/2009 3:37:00 PM Congratulations Adell! ~Trudy~ Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/16/2009 3:36:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Adell. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 10/16/2009 2:37:00 PM Adell, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 10/11/2009 6:23:00 PM Beautiful images flow sweet in this perfect Haiku, Adell! Great inspirations! Good luck in Rauls' contest! Love, Robin Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 10/10/2009 10:41:00 PM Adell, You have written a beautiful haiku inspired by Raul's "Rhythm of the Falls" contest. It will be difficult for him to pick a winner, I'm sure. Very nice job with this one. Good luck. Love, Dane Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 10/9/2009 11:41:00 AM Thank you Adell. This is such a wonderful haiku. It reminds me of the rain. Great job! Joseph Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 10/9/2009 5:51:00 AM We also had months too dry here in Germany so we are looking forward to some rain. Very expressive haiku, Adell, especially line two. And thanks for your comment on Day Dreams. Love, Gert Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/8/2009 7:45:00 AM Excellent haiku, Adell! I love the sound and images conveyed. Fall rains are welcome here in Florida. It's been dry lately, but perhaps if I imagine the rain as you describe it, God will bless us with some. Beautiful description! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

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