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Pitter Patter Falls (Haiku)

rushing waters fall as of sweet rhythmic curtains, draping moss and stone Submitted for Raul Moreno's "Rhythm of The Falls" contest.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2010 4:08:00 AM

Great write that so deserved a win...Congratulations...Sara

Skat A

Date: 4/5/2010 4:34:00 PM

A wonderful haiku.

Date: 11/4/2009 1:58:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 1:18:00 PM

I like your title and how you describe the water as "sweet rhythmic curtains". Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/24/2009 7:28:00 PM

Dear Adell, Congratulations on YOUR placing in Raul's Contest with this well deserved Haiku YOUR Talent is Inspiring ALWAYS...HG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/23/2009 3:53:00 PM

lovely precise imagery! congrad's Light & Love

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations, Adelle, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/21/2009 9:05:00 AM

Very Lovely haiku... I can See and Hear this Poem (and I Love Waterfall Scenes) MoonBee

Sue Mason

Date: 10/19/2009 5:12:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Adell. This is a winner in my book ... smile ...

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 9:29:00 AM

Contratulations...I love your Haiku.. There were so many good ones...I'm glad I didn't have to judge...Marty

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/18/2009 9:24:00 PM

Congratulations, Adell!! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 9:07:00 PM

FELICITATIONS! on your win. ...curtains...draping... AWESOME imagery!

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:49:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Adell.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 10/16/2009 7:56:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku, dear Adell. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/16/2009 7:25:00 PM

I can feel the spray from your image here. Nice work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anihs

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 5:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your WIN with this beautiful Haiku, Adell! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2009 4:36:00 PM

A beautiful description and a winning poem! Congratulations, Adell!! Love, Carrie

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/16/2009 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations Adell! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2009 3:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Adell. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/16/2009 2:37:00 PM

Adell, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/11/2009 6:23:00 PM

Beautiful images flow sweet in this perfect Haiku, Adell! Great inspirations! Good luck in Rauls' contest! Love, Robin

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/10/2009 10:41:00 PM

Adell, You have written a beautiful haiku inspired by Raul's "Rhythm of the Falls" contest. It will be difficult for him to pick a winner, I'm sure. Very nice job with this one. Good luck. Love, Dane

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/9/2009 11:41:00 AM

Thank you Adell. This is such a wonderful haiku. It reminds me of the rain. Great job! Joseph

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/9/2009 5:51:00 AM

We also had months too dry here in Germany so we are looking forward to some rain. Very expressive haiku, Adell, especially line two. And thanks for your comment on Day Dreams. Love, Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2009 7:45:00 AM

Excellent haiku, Adell! I love the sound and images conveyed. Fall rains are welcome here in Florida. It's been dry lately, but perhaps if I imagine the rain as you describe it, God will bless us with some. Beautiful description! Love, Carolyn