Jean Murray Poet Acrostic

Pitter Patter

P ropped up on my pillows
I n the attic room,
T inkling sounds of
T he soft rain on glass
E ngulfs me in the peaceful
R etreat that is my boudoir.

P laying a soothing tune.
A llowing me to drift off
T o dreamworld again.
T reasured extra hours
E nveloped in eiderdown.
R eveling in rainy days. 


05/03/2017

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Charlie Smith March 19, 2017 at 8:37 AM No better sleep ever than when listening to the rainfall. Congratulations Jean... Jean Murray March 19, 2017 at 10:03 AM Thank you Charlie

Shadow Hamilton March 19, 2017 at 3:03 AM peace is what I feel reading this poem Jean congrats on placing hugs Jean Murray March 19, 2017 at 5:39 AM Thank you Shadow. My muse is on holiday these days, so your placement has encouraged me to have another go.

Just James March 6, 2017 at 12:05 PM You paint a lovely picture....loved it

Probir Gupta March 6, 2017 at 10:01 AM If pitter patter we can enjoy rain is no matter ... Read with pleasure ... Jean Murray March 6, 2017 at 10:43 AM Thank you for reading my wee poem Probir.

Tim Smith March 5, 2017 at 6:32 PM I feel at ease just reading...the flow is seamless Jean Murray March 5, 2017 at 6:44 PM That's good Tim.

Ilene Bauer March 5, 2017 at 6:03 PM i'm not a stay in bed kind of person, but you've made this sound very appealing, jean! beautifully done! Jean Murray March 5, 2017 at 6:05 PM Thank you Ilene.

Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 5:45 PM what a fabulous acrostic jean - the imagery is so restful I can hear the rain pitter pattering and lulling me to sleep:-) hugs Jan xx Jean Murray March 5, 2017 at 5:57 PM My middle child takes after me Jan. She wears a T shirt that says "I'm good in bed...I can stay there all day."

Heidi Sands March 5, 2017 at 5:30 PM Beautiful and peaceful Jean. I enjoyed reading this :) Jean Murray March 5, 2017 at 5:55 PM I'm really just a lazy lump Heidi.