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Pitter Patter

P ropped up on my pillows I n the attic room, T inkling sounds of T he soft rain on glass E ngulfs me in the peaceful R etreat that is my boudoir. P laying a soothing tune. A llowing me to drift off T o dreamworld again. T reasured extra hours E nveloped in eiderdown. R eveling in rainy days. 05/03/2017

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Date: 3/19/2017 8:37:00 AM
No better sleep ever than when listening to the rainfall. Congratulations Jean...
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/19/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 3/19/2017 3:03:00 AM
peace is what I feel reading this poem Jean congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 3/19/2017 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Shadow. My muse is on holiday these days, so your placement has encouraged me to have another go.
Date: 3/6/2017 12:05:00 PM
You paint a lovely picture....loved it
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:01:00 AM
If pitter patter we can enjoy rain is no matter ... Read with pleasure ...
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:43:00 AM
Thank you for reading my wee poem Probir.
Date: 3/5/2017 6:32:00 PM
I feel at ease just reading...the flow is seamless
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Date: 3/5/2017 6:44:00 PM
That's good Tim.
Date: 3/5/2017 6:03:00 PM
i'm not a stay in bed kind of person, but you've made this sound very appealing, jean! beautifully done!
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Date: 3/5/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thank you Ilene.
Date: 3/5/2017 5:45:00 PM
what a fabulous acrostic jean - the imagery is so restful I can hear the rain pitter pattering and lulling me to sleep:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:57:00 PM
My middle child takes after me Jan. She wears a T shirt that says "I'm good in bed...I can stay there all day."
Date: 3/5/2017 5:30:00 PM
Beautiful and peaceful Jean. I enjoyed reading this :)
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:55:00 PM
I'm really just a lazy lump Heidi.

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