Andrea Dietrich Poet Haiku

Pitch-Dark Rain: Apocalyptic

Pitch Dark Rain: Apocalyptic

vanished polar ice
oceans’ currents all askew. . . .
skylines blaze scarlet

comes a scathing wind
scorching land left not immersed. . . .
waters turn crimson

moans escape parched tongues
prayers ascend to ashen skies. . . .
pitch-dark rain pounds down


For Royal Ninja's Crimson Poetry Contest

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Skat A May 16, 2015 at 12:28 PM lol, yeah, i can't wait to close this one

Skat A May 12, 2015 at 12:58 PM LOL,,, WHERE ARE THE ZOMBIES ANDREA... YOU CAN NOT WRITE AND MENTION A DARK FEELING WITH NO ZOMBIES... JK... I LOVE THIS.... SCRATCHY WIND.... SKAT

Sara Kendrick February 6, 2011 at 4:19 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 11:02 PM Nice trio of haiku poems, Andrea. Congratulations on your win with these fine entries.

Kory Calhoun January 24, 2011 at 6:09 AM Hi Andrea - An excellent haiku. Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 23, 2011 at 8:05 AM coming back here to say super congrats! I really liked your approach here, Andrea! :) hugs to you :) -- nikko :)

Julie Heckman January 22, 2011 at 7:59 AM this haiku is beautiful, I'm especially taken with the phrase "skyline blaze scarlet". I really like how it is in a series, it flows very nicely. I rarely give a "7" but you got me on this one. Thanks for your comments on my work. Julie

Robert Pettit January 20, 2011 at 2:12 AM Nice set of very descriptive haiku.

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet January 19, 2011 at 1:33 PM This was just fantastic Andrea.Congrats on your 6th.place win.~Luv~Teresa

The Situation January 18, 2011 at 7:26 PM congradulations on your win. T. H.

Caryl Muzzey January 18, 2011 at 1:26 PM A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read. Carly

Phyllis Babcock January 18, 2011 at 8:02 AM A very dark thought on this awesome write. Very descriptive and visual . Congratulations on your win. Love Phyl

Tahera Mannan January 17, 2011 at 7:50 PM Many warm congratulations for this super win Andrea.

Dr.Ram Mehta January 17, 2011 at 2:19 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Andrea

James Fraser January 17, 2011 at 12:25 PM Terrific Dark Haiku set Andrea. Mega congrats with this fine poetry....:)

Audrey Haick January 17, 2011 at 11:07 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with these perfect Haikus, Andrea! Always, Annalise

Elaine George January 17, 2011 at 8:48 AM Awesome, Andrea. Way to go. Lainie

Carrie Richards January 17, 2011 at 8:23 AM Very dark and brooding !!! Congrats, Andrea!! A great, if foreboding poem!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2011 at 5:46 AM Congrats Andrea on your stunning success in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry my friend... enjoy another sweet success and top ten victory with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2011 at 5:36 AM Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Andrea, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico January 17, 2011 at 3:59 AM A winner from the moment it left your pen!!!! excellent my poet friend...luv Michael

Wilma Neels January 17, 2011 at 3:48 AM Andrea, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest.. Hope your Monday will be a good one :) love Wilma

Kash Poet January 17, 2011 at 2:52 AM I missed this one!Wonderful!Congrats Andrea on your win-kashinath

Noel Villarosa January 16, 2011 at 11:50 PM Congratulations, Andrea on your winning for this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Joyce Johnson January 16, 2011 at 9:44 PM Wonderful haikus. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce

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