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Pitch-Dark Rain: Apocalyptic

Pitch Dark Rain: Apocalyptic vanished polar ice oceans’ currents all askew. . . . skylines blaze scarlet comes a scathing wind scorching land left not immersed. . . . waters turn crimson moans escape parched tongues prayers ascend to ashen skies. . . . pitch-dark rain pounds down
For Royal Ninja's Crimson Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/16/2015 12:28:00 PM
lol, yeah, i can't wait to close this one
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Date: 5/12/2015 12:58:00 PM
LOL,,, WHERE ARE THE ZOMBIES ANDREA... YOU CAN NOT WRITE AND MENTION A DARK FEELING WITH NO ZOMBIES... JK... I LOVE THIS.... SCRATCHY WIND.... SKAT
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:02:00 PM
Nice trio of haiku poems, Andrea. Congratulations on your win with these fine entries.
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:09:00 AM
Hi Andrea - An excellent haiku. Congratulations on your WIN in the "Dark Rain" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:05:00 AM
coming back here to say super congrats! I really liked your approach here, Andrea! :) hugs to you :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:59:00 AM
this haiku is beautiful, I'm especially taken with the phrase "skyline blaze scarlet". I really like how it is in a series, it flows very nicely. I rarely give a "7" but you got me on this one. Thanks for your comments on my work. Julie
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:12:00 AM
Nice set of very descriptive haiku.
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Date: 1/19/2011 1:33:00 PM
This was just fantastic Andrea.Congrats on your 6th.place win.~Luv~Teresa
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:26:00 PM
congradulations on your win. T. H.
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Date: 1/18/2011 1:26:00 PM
A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. I enjoyed the read. Carly
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Date: 1/18/2011 8:02:00 AM
A very dark thought on this awesome write. Very descriptive and visual . Congratulations on your win. Love Phyl
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Date: 1/17/2011 7:50:00 PM
Many warm congratulations for this super win Andrea.
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 1/17/2011 12:25:00 PM
Terrific Dark Haiku set Andrea. Mega congrats with this fine poetry....:)
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Date: 1/17/2011 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest with these perfect Haikus, Andrea! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:48:00 AM
Awesome, Andrea. Way to go. Lainie
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:23:00 AM
Very dark and brooding !!! Congrats, Andrea!! A great, if foreboding poem!!
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:46:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your stunning success in the Dark Rain contest with this vibrant entry my friend... enjoy another sweet success and top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Dark Rain" contest Andrea, sponsored by S K A T*. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:59:00 AM
A winner from the moment it left your pen!!!! excellent my poet friend...luv Michael
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:48:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in Irma's contest.. Hope your Monday will be a good one :) love Wilma
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:52:00 AM
I missed this one!Wonderful!Congrats Andrea on your win-kashinath
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Date: 1/16/2011 11:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your winning for this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 1/16/2011 9:44:00 PM
Wonderful haikus. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Joyce
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