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Pinnacle

I stood, as if buoyed up, atop a crag, unchanged (yet somehow changed), not knowing why my mountain-climbing friends could so much lag, for I was where the pinnacle met sky, but they were gone completely from my view, and in the recess, then it dawned on me my situation strangely was askew! My vision was an eagle's. I could see the roads along the shore where we had docked before we'd started up each wrinkled slope. Then further on, my mates, all sobbing, gawked at someone motionless who lay with rope in lifeless clutch. I felt no wrath, but peace engulf me; I embraced my soul's release. 9/26/2014 An N/A poem for Screwed X Poetry Contest of Rob Carmack

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:51:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats on your Screwed X win. LINDA
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:51:00 AM
Wonder why it got screwed up earlier.. congrats on big win dear Andrea.
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Date: 1/20/2016 3:00:00 PM
Very intriguing ...Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:25:00 AM
Andrea, Congrats on your win. SKAT **
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:57:00 AM
My vision was an Eagle's......retry we'll try.
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Date: 10/3/2014 7:34:00 AM
Excellent, Andrea! You are innovative and imaginative. The pinnacle is reached in the great ending. I can see this high on the winners' list. // paul
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Date: 10/1/2014 3:42:00 AM
I love this sonnet, Andrea. Such a wonderful and unexpected ending. Very well crafted and exciting to read. I felt no wrath, but peace. So profound, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 9/29/2014 7:23:00 PM
Your 2nd and last line..:) beautiful Andrea..:) and thoughtful one!!!
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Date: 9/29/2014 6:58:00 PM
thank you for taking me to the high point for your mountain. I can envision and anticipate all that you experienced through your words. hugs
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:59:00 AM
oh, love theclever surprise ending
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Date: 9/29/2014 2:37:00 AM
Superb write here Andrea. Enjoyed this one immensely. The very last line, with "I embraced my soul's release," is a great ending. Cheers, Gary
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:11:00 AM
Excellent. Very powerful and meaningful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 9/28/2014 2:17:00 AM
Oh lordy, the Sonnet queen strikes again...'unchanged (yet somehow changed), not knowing why'. What a line! Wish I'd been there...
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Date: 9/28/2014 1:03:00 AM
Adventure of the soul is what I think makes people want to climb. I enjoyed the realism you incorporated into this poem Andrea. Should do wonderful in the contest.
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:50:00 PM
I have never climbed a mountain - but my dentist has and he said he would never do it again. You capture the joy and sorrow of such an adventure in your newest ode. Nice! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:37:00 PM
Stellar write Andrea..Hope you're having a lovely weekend!
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Date: 9/27/2014 3:20:00 PM
really love how you drew this excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 9/27/2014 1:49:00 PM
Again...flawless, my dear. You do enjambment so well. The content...WOW! How sad and triumphant at the same time. You rock!
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:02:00 AM
This is a piece that should be added to poets favs whose cup of tea this is. I can't emphasize enough how important it is to fav poems you genuinely love.
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:54:00 AM
wow Powerful poem
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Date: 9/27/2014 6:25:00 AM
Your title so apt, complements the poem, also the poet at the top where she deserved to be,,,both the poem and the poet The Pinnacle of wordiness is where you are and in my opinion will forever always remain....
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Date: 9/26/2014 11:44:00 PM
WOW!!!! A Brilliant take on the theme, so very creative. Then there is your words, your form. WOW!!!!
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Date: 9/26/2014 10:34:00 PM
Imagination galore, have you ever climbed atop a crag? I hope that death is like your poem; able to embrace the soul's release.
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:06:00 PM
How tragic Andrea...Unfortunately many climbers are killed each year....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/26/2014 6:56:00 PM
Wow, what an imagination Andrea. I love listening to you fly and that last line, just wow.
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