Pink Joy

~~~ To Royal and Ezzelle~~~
              with congratulations


              Pink Joy

When I was six months pregnant
I knew a girl it would be.
They did no ultrasounds then,
it was just a feeling, you see.

I bought a wicker bassinette,
white and frilly pink.
So sure that it would be a girl.
My hubby didn't know what to think.

The second that I heard her cry
I said " Is she okay?"
knowing it would be a girl
before the doctor had a chance to say.

So wrapped in a pink blanket
they handed me my little one.
Within two minutes hubby changed his mind,
no longer wanting a son.

Within a day he had forgotten
that he actually wanted a boy
and you'd have thought it was his idea
to have this pink bundle of joy.




for Royal Trevino's "Pink Joy" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bauer Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 10:43 AM
nice one! i love the ending.
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 9:53 AM
francine, I just went to the bottom of these comments and saw how I was the FIRST comment here in May of 2011! How nice to see it judged now and yours on the list. And I just saw the note you had left under my comment, that this was about YOUR own pink bundle of joy. Congrats on your win.
Poet Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 11:44 PM
Very nice poem Francine.Congratulations on your win.
Pettit Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on your win Francine. This is a good writing as usual.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 9:06 AM
congrats Francine on a wonderful win for sweet words for baby Ezzelle luv..
Brown Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Royal's "Pink Joy" contest Francine. Love, Carol
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 2:11 AM
Nice! Congratulations on your superb 3rd place win!
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Francine, This is a wonderful work. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on winning 3rd place in Royal's contest.......S.Ronthorpe
Long Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 5:41 PM
This is so beautiful nicely done, good luck in the contest. cory
Fraser Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Superb flow to this Francine. When you rhyme, girl do you rhyme :) Good luck in Royal's contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Poetess Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 11:52 PM
Beautiful write for the contest pink joy. Best of Luck for a 1st place win. Love gf
Onclaud Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 10:21 AM
oh francine... so effortless done with tender images all around... who could rersist a cute baby girl?? my winning bet! superb! :) huggs, nette
Zzzzz Avatar
May 25, 2011 at 4:50 AM
This seems to be a popular contest, with quite a few really good poems entered. I think you have a good chance with this fine effort! Regards, Robert.
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 8:48 PM
so what is it, Francine?? Probably I should know the answer to this, but I am so forgetful!
La France Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 5:00 PM
This is beautiful, Francine, like you I sort of knew what my baby would be, for sure I knew it would be a boy, we were so excited, but God needed a baby angel . . . best of luck in the contest with this wonderful poem~~
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 4:57 PM
LOL I bet you were real happy! As the eldest girl all I heard was let's try again I want a BOY! Dad has 3 boys & 3 girls & wow do the boys give him way more trouble! [Your hubbies a good man!] Light & Love
Burton Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Enjoyed reading today have a good one.
Devonshire Avatar
May 24, 2011 at 11:22 AM
Oh, Francine, how cool that you just "had that feeling" it would be a girl!! Dad was hoping for another boy when I was born, but I'm sure I grew on him. LOL This is such a heartwarming poem, my friend. I'm sure Royal will love it too. Best wishes in her contest! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 10:44 PM
Yes thats how it works when the magic little person arrives. Lovely verse babe. I have ridden hundreds of miles a droving cattle so i have some affinity with rawhide etc. xo Don
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 8:57 PM
VEry fun poem, Francine. Did you just guess all this stuff or did Royal tell you it? It's so hard to personalize a poem when you don't know the details of the baby, but it is so often true that dads want boys and then fall madly in love with their pink little bundles of joy!
Roberts Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 9:57 PM
this would be about my own pink bundle of joy Andrea
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