Pink Heart of Valentine

desert heart of moon one red rose grows amorous earth bathed in rain waits two springs of mountain sing the glory of love god mingle river born Her mirror shy Does not speak out heart Can't he love the queen more ? (Double) Valentine Haiku plus 1 questionku #2 - Poetry Contest Sponsor Poet Destroyer A POET: RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY Penned on 2nd February, 2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2015 5:46:00 PM

Ahh!! Congrats on this romantic winner..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2015 3:34:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Rajat:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/22/2015 3:12:00 PM

You tempt your Valentine with sweet descriptive words, Rajat! Quite a unique take on the theme. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 1:46:00 PM

RAJAT, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2015 6:41:00 PM

this is sweet and I loved the last part. That mirror on the wall, like that mirror of the wicked queen in Snow white.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/2/2015 2:20:00 PM

beautifully romantic - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/2/2015 5:06:00 AM

Incomparably graceful, dear Rajat! A seven!