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Pink and Blue

Pink and blue drops on the leaves of thought plant Birds in twilight say adieu I love you I love you _____________________________________________________ 10/10/2016

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/12/2016 7:35:00 AM

I totally agree with Victor about onomatopoeia. The poem is lovely & sweet.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/13/2016 12:21:00 AM

Thank you ...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/11/2016 11:37:00 AM

charming in its brevity, probir..huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/12/2016 6:09:00 AM

Thank you ...

Jan Allison

Date: 10/11/2016 5:19:00 AM

very beautiful Probir - I have only written a couple in this form myself:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/11/2016 5:21:00 AM

Thank you, Jan ... probir

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/10/2016 2:53:00 PM

Captivating images wrapped in romantic expressions dear, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/10/2016 9:32:00 PM

Thank you for likimg, Demetrios ..