Piney Woods-Bitesize Poetry Contest

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submitted 12/24/2023 for Line Gauthier's Bitesize Poetry Contest

pine boughs whispering blanket of snow filters in softer than a kiss verdant wands of pine wave in arboreal air sense of renewal

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/24/2023 7:05:00 PM

You hit the jackpot with this one, methinks, Sara. A festival of sensory imagery to die for. Love that pine smell, coming at me right through my screen.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/25/2023 4:24:00 AM

awww, thank you Gershon! I hope the pine scent wasn't too strong, smiles and blessings, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/24/2023 6:14:00 AM

Two wonderful haiku with stunning imagery fitting for this time of the year.. you do your H forms so well.. the haibun and the haiku..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/24/2023 4:15:00 PM

thank you, Silent One! I appreciate your kind words and support for my poetic endeavors. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/24/2023 5:11:00 AM

It would be nice to get away to a sanctuary like that Sara. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/24/2023 4:16:00 PM

I agree...it would be lovely. Thanks for your visit this Christmas Eve.