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Pine Needles

They scootered through the neighborhood, Their helmets strapped on tight. On foot, we followed, making sure That they got home all right. We stopped beneath a pine tree, Touched the needles, soft and green, As I remembered years ago, A slightly different scene: My grandson in the stroller Where he reached out just to feel Those needles which held, even then, Such strong tactile appeal. The years fly by, each memory Tucked safely in its place, Just waiting to be summoned When I need its sweet embrace.

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Date: 9/7/2020 2:37:00 PM
This is why I love your poetry so much, ilene. You write a scrapbook entry every day, like letters to your future self to unwrap and remember later. This is what memories are - little presents to open when the time is right, and you commit them to poetry so admirably. I've learned so much from you!
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Date: 9/8/2020 11:01:00 AM
What a wonderful comment, John! You’ve really brightened my day!
Date: 9/6/2020 1:38:00 AM
- Little things ... maybe a scent ... a melody ... evokes memories ... time goes by so fast ... a lovely poem, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2020 12:53:00 PM
The best part of life is looking into the eyes of a loved one who "gets it", i.e., discovers a new wonder in life. Well caught, Ilene! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/5/2020 7:42:00 AM
Pine needles and sweet memories...such a delightful poem, Ilene! ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 9/5/2020 1:33:00 AM
Lovely to call on those memories when your spirits need a boost. Tom
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Date: 9/4/2020 7:16:00 PM
A lovely memory comes to mind! :)
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