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Pine Cone Kissing Needles

Pine cone resting in tree top, when a gentle little breeze, gives him a little push, falling so slowly to the ground, kissing the needles as it passes on by. written 5-9-11

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Carol Eastman

Date: 5/17/2011 12:36:00 PM

Very imaginative and a great thought to visualize.

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/17/2011 6:28:00 AM

gently does it James every time! enjoyed the read today.

James Foulk
Date: 5/17/2011 1:22:00 PM

thank you for reading and commenting on this one.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/15/2011 1:07:00 PM

Sweet and outlook expressed in your write, James! Well done! Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on my latest poems. ;) caroline.

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/15/2011 7:12:00 AM

This has such a soothing feel to it James, even though you are talking about needless. brilliant piece that made me smile :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2011 6:35:00 AM

Very peaceful write..Seems to slow down the thoughts and ideas..Enjoyed..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 5/15/2011 6:06:00 AM

Lovely imagery, James. Beautiful

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2011 4:56:00 AM

Needles cover the ground here, James. Perhaps they are remnants of fallen kisses. Very lovely image. Best wishes for a nice Sunday, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 5/15/2011 3:52:00 AM

And many a kiss it would receive, darn I'm getting jealous. All I get is the needle. Lovely free verse James, have a terrific Sunday....:)

James Foulk
Date: 5/15/2011 10:50:00 AM

thank you James for reading this poem and for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2011 1:41:00 AM

there is something about this light poem that really captured me. I LOVE it. A fave.

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/14/2011 9:19:00 PM

So nice like all your work. Thank you for your kind comments on my work brother. It means a lot to me. God Bless. R.M.

James Foulk
Date: 5/15/2011 11:14:00 AM

thank you for readng this and for your comment.

Constance La France

Date: 5/14/2011 8:53:00 PM

I love the visual, you have painted a picture with words, lovely~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/14/2011 7:54:00 PM

Lovely imagery James and pine cones not only smell wonderful but decorate well too and I use them in my home with glitter .. so lovely as your words tonight.. sorry for your internet issues..it happens.. hope all is well now my friend.. luv..

James Foulk
Date: 5/15/2011 11:55:00 AM

thank you Linda for reading this and for your kind comment, yes it is up and running now.