Pine Cone Kissing Needles

Pine cone resting in tree top,

when a gentle little breeze,

gives him a little push,

falling so slowly to the

ground, kissing the needles

as it passes on by.

written 5-9-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Eastman Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:36 PM
Very imaginative and a great thought to visualize.
Maverick Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 6:28 AM
gently does it James every time! enjoyed the read today.
Foulk Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 1:22 PM
thank you for reading and commenting on this one.
Delacroix Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Sweet and outlook expressed in your write, James! Well done! Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on my latest poems. ;) caroline.
Neels Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 7:12 AM
This has such a soothing feel to it James, even though you are talking about needless. brilliant piece that made me smile :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 6:35 AM
Very peaceful write..Seems to slow down the thoughts and ideas..Enjoyed..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
Horne Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Lovely imagery, James. Beautiful
Devonshire Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 4:56 AM
Needles cover the ground here, James. Perhaps they are remnants of fallen kisses. Very lovely image. Best wishes for a nice Sunday, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 3:52 AM
And many a kiss it would receive, darn I'm getting jealous. All I get is the needle. Lovely free verse James, have a terrific Sunday....:)
Foulk Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 10:50 AM
thank you James for reading this poem and for your comment.
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 1:41 AM
there is something about this light poem that really captured me. I LOVE it. A fave.
Hunt Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 9:19 PM
So nice like all your work. Thank you for your kind comments on my work brother. It means a lot to me. God Bless. R.M.
Foulk Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 11:14 AM
thank you for readng this and for your comment.
La France Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:53 PM
I love the visual, you have painted a picture with words, lovely~~
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 7:54 PM
Lovely imagery James and pine cones not only smell wonderful but decorate well too and I use them in my home with glitter .. so lovely as your words tonight.. sorry for your internet issues..it happens.. hope all is well now my friend.. luv..
Foulk Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 11:55 AM
thank you Linda for reading this and for your kind comment, yes it is up and running now.
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