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Pine Cone Kissing Needles

Pine cone resting in tree top,

when a gentle little breeze,

gives him a little push,

falling so slowly to the

ground, kissing the needles

as it passes on by.

written 5-9-11

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Carol Eastman Date: 5/17/2011 12:36:00 PM Very imaginative and a great thought to visualize. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 5/17/2011 6:28:00 AM gently does it James every time! enjoyed the read today. Login to Reply James Foulk Date: 5/17/2011 1:22:00 PM thank you for reading and commenting on this one.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix Date: 5/15/2011 1:07:00 PM Sweet and outlook expressed in your write, James! Well done! Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on my latest poems. ;) caroline. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 5/15/2011 7:12:00 AM This has such a soothing feel to it James, even though you are talking about needless. brilliant piece that made me smile :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/15/2011 6:35:00 AM Very peaceful write..Seems to slow down the thoughts and ideas..Enjoyed..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/15/2011 6:06:00 AM Lovely imagery, James. Beautiful Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/15/2011 4:56:00 AM Needles cover the ground here, James. Perhaps they are remnants of fallen kisses. Very lovely image. Best wishes for a nice Sunday, Carolyn Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/15/2011 3:52:00 AM And many a kiss it would receive, darn I'm getting jealous. All I get is the needle. Lovely free verse James, have a terrific Sunday....:) Login to Reply James Foulk Date: 5/15/2011 10:50:00 AM thank you James for reading this poem and for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/15/2011 1:41:00 AM there is something about this light poem that really captured me. I LOVE it. A fave. Login to Reply

Matt Hunt Date: 5/14/2011 9:19:00 PM So nice like all your work. Thank you for your kind comments on my work brother. It means a lot to me. God Bless. R.M. Login to Reply James Foulk Date: 5/15/2011 11:14:00 AM thank you for readng this and for your comment.

Constance La France Date: 5/14/2011 8:53:00 PM I love the visual, you have painted a picture with words, lovely~~ Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/14/2011 7:54:00 PM Lovely imagery James and pine cones not only smell wonderful but decorate well too and I use them in my home with glitter .. so lovely as your words tonight.. sorry for your internet issues..it happens.. hope all is well now my friend.. luv.. Login to Reply James Foulk Date: 5/15/2011 11:55:00 AM thank you Linda for reading this and for your kind comment, yes it is up and running now.