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Pillow Talk

despite affection
your inner core was cruel
I gave love freely
yet you turned it against me
I cry into my pillow

betrayalcryfeelingshurtlongingtanka

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Cal Bambi The Word Artist

October 10, 2022 at 12:46 PM

As I said in one of my poems, He/She took the L out of lover Now it's over. You commented on my poem Life Of The Party and started your comment with Childhood Sweetheart. It puzzled me for some time. Did we meet before? Cal Bamni

Linda Alice Fowler

October 10, 2022 at 12:55 PM

Sorry for the confusion. To clarify, I meant a question mark after the comment, wondering if you were writing about someone from your childhood. I did enjoy your lyrics. :)

Panagiota Romios

October 6, 2022 at 11:16 AM

Great sensitive rhyme! It took me a long time to let go of relationships, when there was nothing there. But I was young and trusting. One learns to let go of losers. It is a learning process. Men don’t understand, that they are NOT the “only man”in the world.)) there are billions of men. And, oh the hours wasted in tears..me, too. Pangie

Linda Alice Fowler

October 6, 2022 at 12:16 PM

Hi my friend. Easy for me to move on. I've never really tried to hang on - if it's over, it's over. Thanks for stopping by! Linda

Paul Callus

October 4, 2022 at 11:39 AM

This is lovely, sad and most touching, Linda. It is hurtful when love is given willingly but is not returned. ~ Regards // paul

Linda Alice Fowler

October 4, 2022 at 2:29 PM

Thank you Paul. I'm touched by your visit and comments :) Linda

Andrea Dietrich

October 3, 2022 at 11:24 AM

Soulful tanks, Linda. Thanks for your recent visit to my poems

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2022 at 12:38 PM

Hi Andrea. Thanks for the comment and stop by. :) Linda

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 3, 2022 at 11:21 AM

Hello Linda Alice fowler, as I read this poetry , i felt the pain in the words. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 3, 2022 at 3:01 PM

Hello Linda Alice fowler, you are welcome Linda. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2022 at 12:37 PM

Thank you Darlene De Beaulieu. I appreciate your visit and comments. :) Linda

Rico Leffanta

October 3, 2022 at 11:11 AM

Yes, life can be like a pinball machine when someone else controls the flippers. Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler

October 3, 2022 at 11:20 AM

And I would say friend Rico, that one should not allow their flippers to be controlled by any other than the owner. :)) Thanks for stopping by and commenting! Linda