Pilgrimage

They fought the tide to own some land
A fight I did not understand
They fought the plow, they fought the drought, they fought the debt
But yet, by God, ... they owned the pride

In retrospect, I'm still ashamed
My heart and soul were not engaged
A flippant mood was all I brought, with sighs, and whys and skipping rocks,
    the day we made the pilgrimage

A stranger to this twilight zone
I was about to step upon the moon,
A cratered space of rocks and sage, of rolling hills, with no escape

She saw it differently, of course 
And though her bones were weary, worn
her eyes were strong.   She saw a home

   Her age was then, what mine is now,
   It had been her life.  It was her vow
   to come again, just one more time.  

   Ten years old,  I'd been dragged along
   I couldn't the great attraction
   Overlooked her deep reaction
   I missed the tears within her eyes

   She scanned the place she left behind
   Her gray eyes drinking up the sun, 
   I saw dust, I saw the sand, 
   Where she saw beauty,  I saw none .....
Nothing more than a sea of weeds, crumbling brick, the rocky creek
A place to shuffle restless feet

The years passed by, and I would learn
a home is more than bricks and stone

The photograph I hold today means more to me than words can say
In the rubble she had found one valiant rosebush left behind
    while smiling in the summer sun, among the rocky hills
I wish I could go back to then
But I can smile,… remembering.
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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Just WOW!!! You need to get a publisher. I'm glad I stopped by. It seems every one I chose had a congrats for a win in a contest. I can see why.
Guzzi Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 4:18 PM
Farming is a precious way of live it brings true understanding between man & all of natureCongrad's Light & Love
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Frank H's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations Carrie on a fabulous win xx
Prabhu Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:04 AM
congrats.on such a superb poem and the placement................~sashi
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:56 AM
congrats Carrie on a superb win for this tremendous write expressing belief for the contest luv..
Dufresne Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:14 AM
Jeepers Carrie! you got me misty first thing this morning! What an absolutely beautiful write loaded with imagery and feelings between the lines somehow. Just awesome. Into my favs of course. Congratulations to you my friend
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March 9, 2012 at 3:36 PM
WOW, Carrie, I am loving this! An awesome narrative. You described the feelings of both child and parent so well. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
Kendrick Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Yes, a homeplace becomes imbedded in our being and it can be worth fighting for..Enjoyed reading your entry..Good luck in his contest..Sara
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