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Pilgrimage

They fought the tide to own some land A fight I did not understand They fought the plow, they fought the drought, they fought the debt But yet, by God, ... they owned the pride In retrospect, I'm still ashamed My heart and soul were not engaged A flippant mood was all I brought, with sighs, and whys and skipping rocks, the day we made the pilgrimage A stranger to this twilight zone I was about to step upon the moon, A cratered space of rocks and sage, of rolling hills, with no escape She saw it differently, of course And though her bones were weary, worn her eyes were strong. She saw a home Her age was then, what mine is now, It had been her life. It was her vow to come again, just one more time. Ten years old, I'd been dragged along I couldn't the great attraction Overlooked her deep reaction I missed the tears within her eyes She scanned the place she left behind Her gray eyes drinking up the sun, I saw dust, I saw the sand, Where she saw beauty, I saw none ..... Nothing more than a sea of weeds, crumbling brick, the rocky creek A place to shuffle restless feet The years passed by, and I would learn a home is more than bricks and stone The photograph I hold today means more to me than words can say In the rubble she had found one valiant rosebush left behind while smiling in the summer sun, among the rocky hills I wish I could go back to then But I can smile,… remembering. _________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/16/2013 9:04:00 AM
Just WOW!!! You need to get a publisher. I'm glad I stopped by. It seems every one I chose had a congrats for a win in a contest. I can see why.
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Date: 3/15/2012 4:18:00 PM
Farming is a precious way of live it brings true understanding between man & all of natureCongrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Frank H's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on a fabulous win xx
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:04:00 AM
congrats.on such a superb poem and the placement................~sashi
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:56:00 AM
congrats Carrie on a superb win for this tremendous write expressing belief for the contest luv..
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:14:00 AM
Jeepers Carrie! you got me misty first thing this morning! What an absolutely beautiful write loaded with imagery and feelings between the lines somehow. Just awesome. Into my favs of course. Congratulations to you my friend
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:36:00 PM
WOW, Carrie, I am loving this! An awesome narrative. You described the feelings of both child and parent so well. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:52:00 PM
Yes, a homeplace becomes imbedded in our being and it can be worth fighting for..Enjoyed reading your entry..Good luck in his contest..Sara
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