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Piercing My Sadness

Through pale of eve, my eyes can see beyond the trellis where I stand a rose awaits, brushing the ground through pale of eve, my eyes can see needles of thorns ,calling for me where tips of sadness purls around through pale of eve, my eyes can see, beyond the trellis where I stand. While on the branches, heart’s thorns dry, as if to pierce my faint lament this lonesome rose tried to reply, while on the branches, heart’s thorns dry to face the night we said goodbye, the day he kissed my cheeks and went while on the branches , heart’s thorns dry, as if to pierce my faint lament. Every Rose Has Its Thorn... Kelly Deschler new poem nette onclaud

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Date: 4/2/2014 5:22:00 PM
Hey Nette, Congratulations on your winning poem... Amazing imagery. xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/1/2014 5:19:00 PM
Fantastic and beautiful write...Congrats on your win...This is lovely ,Nette..
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Date: 4/1/2014 6:30:00 AM
Astonishing!!! A true Masterpiece, dear Nette. Lainie.
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Date: 4/1/2014 3:40:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congrats on your well deserved win. A heartfelt lament. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 4/1/2014 1:20:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and nice take, congrats on the fine win, nette
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Date: 3/31/2014 7:22:00 PM
Hi Nette, this is an intersting form and poem for me to read. I like, very. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/31/2014 4:54:00 PM
I loved the repetition of the lines, and the imagery was just beautiful. A wonderful write, Nette! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 3/31/2014 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Nette. Your poem is well done... Verlena
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Date: 3/25/2014 4:20:00 AM
A wonderful write. The element of beauty with a sad goodbye. Great work.
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Date: 3/24/2014 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful roses have their downside - as indeed most beautiful things do. Fine job here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/24/2014 6:35:00 AM
Every rose has a thorn but aren't those roses sweet..Great work..Reads like a winner for the contest..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2014 8:45:00 PM
Dear Nette: Such a deep melancholy in these profound, sad lines. A wonder-full piece of poetry. And lovely too! Leon
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Date: 3/22/2014 8:44:00 AM
I am not really that familiar with this form but I love the emotional effect you have created here.
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Date: 3/22/2014 7:54:00 AM
Romance, longing and beauty. You are a wonder when your words start flowing.
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Date: 3/21/2014 11:50:00 PM
A very moving and beautiful piece Nette.
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Date: 3/21/2014 9:50:00 PM
This write has such a heartfelt sadness within it my friend! I just love the symbolism in this gorgeous poem Nette! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/21/2014 2:59:00 PM
Great read, enjoyed it!
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Date: 3/21/2014 2:45:00 PM
this is really heartfelt i can hear the sadness in it.x
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Date: 3/21/2014 2:22:00 PM
such a deep passion about women's thorns.. ..sad but beautiful piece,so unique!!!...hugs and kisses ^__^ ..Happy weekend!!! :o))
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Date: 3/21/2014 1:54:00 PM
True sadness you evoke here nette. I can feel you with every word. Wonderful write.....Tim
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Date: 3/21/2014 1:39:00 PM
Sad....hauntingly sad, Nette....Symbolism that brings the pain to light.....
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Date: 3/21/2014 11:24:00 AM
What better way to pass by and read this melancholic poem.The contrast of grace and sadness is riveting,"Mounts in reply"; bravery amidst loss. Brava!
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Date: 3/21/2014 11:07:00 AM
You pinned it again, dear Nette! Pain may prick but it makes us somehow invincible. With respect and admiration!
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